Samyak Singh46 Comments on Definitely eternal!?!

Definitely eternal!?!

The vaulted ceiling trips over,
trips over to skim through,
Skim through all the kinships,
Kinships that knit their souls together.

Scrimmages and ruffles did howl,
Howled for long in total falsehood,
O Lord, save some mercy,
Give them the piece of your mind.

Did they not adore this chandelier?
Didn’t they fall for each other’s fidelity?
Proclaiming their bond across borders.
Didn’t they stumble?
Stumbled upon one quest?
As to how much it’s gonna cost?
How long will it take for a change?
For a change that’ll dictate their lives after.

It’s been 7 years 4 months and a dozen days.
They’ve never even repaid a visit.
A visit to this vaulted ceiling.
Where they put this chandelier as a testament,
A testament of how strong they were,
Enough to cross eternity.

O Lord have some mercy!
You know this language or do you?

Once a child asked,” How kings chose their queens?
“Through power and sacrifice”, answered the Saint.

Well, is that true now?
Does a bond so unbreakable and credulous have such a frenetic future?
Ain’t it unfair for all those brewing knots?
Is that why it’s called tying a knot?
“Yeah we proclaim our fidelity all across”
Till death do us apart.

But can it sustain? Does it sustain?
“Power and sacrifice”..well,
“love” …that’s what takes them over.

Only fact amazes here,
All insecurities faded back then,
They were all sharing memories,
Looked into each other in reverie,
A jolt would shake them if anyone got a scrub.

And now?
Combats till “it” gets cremated.
Now do they still adore this ceiling, Or are they still vexing over it.

All I want is,
The ceiling may live thousand years,
Driving through all these brittle knots,
Knots claimed to be a stallion to blunders.
This vaulted ceiling may overhaul.

O lord have some mercy!

An effort to sue up your mind with a musing. We don’t often realise how things get all mixed up in the grinder and the key moments including relationships get affected. Severe enough to cause a break….

Hope you all have a steadfast support from all across..

Cheers…

46 thoughts on “Definitely eternal!?!”

  1. Sid October 12, 2019 — 5:25 am

    Once a child asked,” How kings chose their queens?
    “Through power and sacrifice”, answered the Saint.

    Well, is that true now?

    Love takes over.

    This is such a rich and beautiful piece. The way you mixed the royal aspects is what I really liked.

    Great worked. Also this mixed up my mind totally and I’m completely sued 😂💜💜

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      Samyak Singh October 12, 2019 — 2:23 pm

      Wow…it’s so good to hear this from Mr witty himself. Long time since you actually got the point from my poetries..😂💙
      Thank you so much for being sued up. I hope I do it everytime 😄💙💙

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      1. Sid October 12, 2019 — 5:57 pm

        😂😂😂yes. Long time since I read your poetries actually. Don’t worry I’ll catch up.
        💙💙💙💙🌷

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        Samyak Singh October 12, 2019 — 7:55 pm

        No worries bro. All I care about is your honest reviews which are more than helpful even though I hardly catch up with your vocabulary complaint..😅😅

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      3. Sid October 13, 2019 — 3:53 am

        😂😂😂😭. Your vocabulary is want makes you stand out. 🔥🔥💙😂💙

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        Samyak Singh October 13, 2019 — 11:02 am

        That sounds cool then… I’ll learn more now😊😊😅

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  2. Dua Siddiqui October 12, 2019 — 6:08 am

    Woah Man, Such a Masterpiece. ❤❤

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      Samyak Singh October 12, 2019 — 2:24 pm

      Thanks neighbor💙💙
      Always a noble support🤩🤩

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      1. Dua Siddiqui October 12, 2019 — 2:30 pm

        My pleasure ❤

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  3. Motivational diaries October 12, 2019 — 6:16 am

    This was mesmerising 🧡🧡
    Loved your work as always !! 😊

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      Samyak Singh October 12, 2019 — 2:24 pm

      Thanks chhoti💙💙
      Keep the support!😄

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      1. Motivational diaries October 12, 2019 — 2:27 pm

        Haha “chhoti” so sweet 😂 and yes will always keep the support bro 👍👍

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  4. inhiscare753 October 12, 2019 — 10:08 am

    Samyak, this brilliantly expressed, every word written speaks with such deep emotion. This is Creatively woven, speaks volumes.

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      Samyak Singh October 12, 2019 — 2:26 pm

      I’ve always admired your beautiful insights..thanks for the humble support💙💙

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      1. inhiscare753 October 12, 2019 — 2:33 pm

        Samyak, you are certainly welcome. Appreciate your words and insights, as well. 😊🙏

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  5. Winnie October 12, 2019 — 4:53 pm

    Awesome! I really live the photo. 😍

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      Samyak Singh October 12, 2019 — 5:49 pm

      Thank you so much Winnie. Love your support!💙

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  6. Mermaid October 12, 2019 — 6:39 pm

    I am really amazed by the way you put it through and I actually wanted it to keep going.
    Very rich piece 🌼

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      Samyak Singh October 12, 2019 — 8:00 pm

      I’m glad you could connect with it so well…I feel very much privileged now.. genuinely it lifts me up. Thank you so much..💙💙

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  7. Tanusri sen October 16, 2019 — 8:55 am

    Amazing !! No words I have ,mind blowing!!!

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      Samyak Singh October 16, 2019 — 5:08 pm

      Thanks a lot for reading. Really love what you say here!!! 🙂

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  8. YBP October 20, 2019 — 2:21 am

    Samyak! Quite enthralling! As always! ❤️

    I nommed you for The Future Goals Award ❤️

    https://passcodelove.com/2019/10/19/the-future-goals-award-❤

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      Samyak Singh October 23, 2019 — 12:44 pm

      Thank you so much Yeka 💕😊☺️
      It’s heartening to see you encouraging us amateur writers. Feel grateful with the nomination 💙💙

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      1. YBP October 23, 2019 — 2:16 pm

        You’re so sweet! And truly amazingly gifted!!! So happy to see you shining and sharing all your amazing talent! ❤️💛💜💙💚🧡❤️

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        Samyak Singh October 23, 2019 — 2:27 pm

        I’m blessed by the support from you 💙💙💙Is there any other platform where you share your beautiful writings..? Like Instagram or Twitter?

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  9. Florence Ezekafor October 22, 2019 — 7:58 am

    Hello Samyark
    This is brilliant. Hope you’re doing great.

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      Samyak Singh October 23, 2019 — 12:43 pm

      Thank you so much Flor 💕😊
      Have been a little off with WordPress lately. Surely will find something inspirational to write again. Hope you’re doing great too☺️☺️😊

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      1. Florence Ezekafor October 23, 2019 — 1:37 pm

        Yes I am. Thanks a lot. Have a blessed day.

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  10. Sakshi October 23, 2019 — 12:20 pm

    Oh this is brilliant

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  11. Sarika, Pure Reflections October 23, 2019 — 12:39 pm

    Wow that’s awesome 👌👌…I m speechless

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      Samyak Singh October 23, 2019 — 12:48 pm

      Thank you so much Sarika. You’ve been there since the beginning. Means a million to me😊😊💙

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  12. stevescountry November 1, 2019 — 4:12 pm

    Wonderfully written emotional poem Samyak! So strong and deep with your words yet expressed too with a plea of hope. I enjoyed this very much Samyak!😁😸🌞

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      Samyak Singh November 1, 2019 — 5:11 pm

      Couldn’t agree more with you Steve 💙💙💙
      It’s a plea of hope and trust…in these times of distress. Hope you’re having a great day💙💙😊😊

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      1. stevescountry November 1, 2019 — 7:48 pm

        Thanks Samyak! Still recovering, lots of pain, still can’t do much, and it could be another 2 months yet. Already 2 months down, so that means getting close to the end! Enjoy your weekend Samyak!😁😸😎

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        Samyak Singh November 1, 2019 — 7:57 pm

        Ahhh Steve! It’s good to see you in such good spirits already. You’ll recover in a jiffy and then muffin will have her friend back on track again😄😸💙😄

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      3. stevescountry November 1, 2019 — 8:08 pm

        Definitely! Staying positive is always the best way to go! Thanks Samyak! Looking forward to more walking time!😄😸🚶‍♂️🌲

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        Samyak Singh November 1, 2019 — 8:18 pm

        Good to hear that from you. Enjoy and keep writing your heart out💙💙😸😄

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      5. stevescountry November 1, 2019 — 9:42 pm

        Absolutely writing on!😀✍

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  13. Ianus Christius November 5, 2019 — 10:36 am

    Interesting and above all very unusual and creative approach to story telling! 🙂

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      Samyak Singh November 5, 2019 — 6:01 pm

      I love your beautiful insight about the story. Indeed it ain’t typical yet I’m happy it could intrigue you…thank you so much Sir 😊😊❣️

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