Shimmering ride

Stranded at the shore,

Unbridled ecstasy grips me,

Negating the smokes of yore

Ruling the world, we accost

I somehow muster the strength,

Strolling down a squashy length

Entrapping hues, dreaming and lost.


An effort to sue up your minds with an acrostic!

SUNRISE is always fixating…on behalf of all those who can’t have this beauty to behold.

Hope you all relate to it well..and suggest me some more forms of poetry I should try out…!!πŸ€”

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Thank you😊

41 thoughts on “Shimmering ride

  1. This was fantabulous !!! πŸ’™πŸ’™

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    1. Thanks a lot for the motivation. Always tops it all😍😍

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      1. Haha !! It’s my absolute pleasure samyak 😊😊😊

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  2. Nicely written ✌🏻

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    1. Means a lot.πŸ’™πŸ’™
      Thank you😊

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  3. This was superb and beautifully penned. Selection of words is very good.
    Hey! Why don’t you’re writing on night.

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    1. Thank you so much πŸ’™πŸ’™
      Glad to get your advice. Nights are fabulous. Will figure out about nights soon. Keep the support πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ’•

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      1. Yeah! Good Luck! 😊

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  4. Beautifully penned work Sam, this is outstanding ❀

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    1. Thank you neighbor. You’ve been awesome since forever πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

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      1. πŸ˜€β˜Ί

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    1. Thanks Sarika for reading this. Means a lotπŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™

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  5. πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

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    1. Thanks Jess πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“

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  6. What a beautiful poem??. It’s honestly very amazing. Nature’s glory along with a writer’s thoughts always steals our hearts.
    Actually enjoyed it. Wish you a happy weekend .

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    1. Thank you so much for such a lovely insight. Hope you’ve a Super SundayπŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š

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      1. You’re welcome πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜€

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  7. Mind= sued
    Great poem. It took me a while to understand the beauty of it. But awwweesssommmee β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️

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    1. Thank you so much. I hope I learn to make you feel better with my poems someday. Honest+ witty= YOU.πŸ˜ƒπŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™

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      1. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ It’s a pleasure. πŸ’™πŸ’™
        Also, funny + idk= you

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  8. Acrostic is always amazing to read. Well done 😍β™₯

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    1. Thanks for reading πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™

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    1. Thanks for reading πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™
      Keep up the support 😊😊😊

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      1. Thank you 😊

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  9. You sue my mind every time.
    Well written.

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    1. It really means a lot πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ˜Š

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  10. You totally sued my mind. Beauty of nature described by such beautiful words , wonderfully penned ❀❀❀

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    1. Thanks Richa. The feedback I get from you is precious..love the support β˜ΊοΈπŸ’™πŸ’™

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      1. You are always welcome my friend ❀❀❀

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  11. Thanks Winnie. Grateful for your support πŸ’™πŸ’™

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  12. I really liked the way you wove out all the lines of the poem around the word “sunrise.” Now that’s a self-imposed restriction you worked with beautifully! πŸ™‚

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    1. Such honest insight lightens up my mood. Thank you so much for the support. Means a lot Mia😊😊

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  13. You speak my mind here, “Entrapping hues, dreaming and lost.” A lovely composition.

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  14. Wonderful poem Samyak! I love sunrises while on the lake or on a high hill watching as the sun rises above the distant horizon! So beautiful and captivating. Great idea with an acrostic!😁😸🌞

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    1. Thank you so much Steve πŸ’™πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š
      Certainly this autumn breeze is going to make mornings beautiful πŸ’•πŸ’•

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      1. My pleasure Samyak!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ΊπŸŒž

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