Shimmering ride

Stranded at the shore,

Unbridled ecstasy grips me,

Negating the smokes of yore

Ruling the world, we accost

I somehow muster the strength,

Strolling down a squashy length

Entrapping hues, dreaming and lost.


An effort to sue up your minds with an acrostic!

SUNRISE is always fixating…on behalf of all those who can’t have this beauty to behold.

Hope you all relate to it well..and suggest me some more forms of poetry I should try out…!!🤔

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Thank you😊

41 thoughts on “Shimmering ride

  1. Prakriti Verma's avatar

    This was fantabulous !!! 💙💙

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    1. Samyak Singh's avatar

      Thanks a lot for the motivation. Always tops it all😍😍

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      1. Prakriti Verma's avatar

        Haha !! It’s my absolute pleasure samyak 😊😊😊

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  2. Dreamer ❤'s avatar

    Nicely written ✌🏻

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    1. Samyak Singh's avatar

      Means a lot.💙💙
      Thank you😊

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      1. Dreamer ❤'s avatar

        My pleasure

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  3. Sadia Noor's avatar

    This was superb and beautifully penned. Selection of words is very good.
    Hey! Why don’t you’re writing on night.

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    1. Samyak Singh's avatar

      Thank you so much 💙💙
      Glad to get your advice. Nights are fabulous. Will figure out about nights soon. Keep the support 😊😊💕

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      1. Sadia Noor's avatar

        Yeah! Good Luck! 😊

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  4. duasiddiqui's avatar

    Beautifully penned work Sam, this is outstanding ❤

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    1. Samyak Singh's avatar

      Thank you neighbor. You’ve been awesome since forever 💕💕💕

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      1. duasiddiqui's avatar

        😀☺

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    1. Samyak Singh's avatar

      Thanks Sarika for reading this. Means a lot💙💙💙

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  5. umrahsania's avatar

    What a beautiful poem??. It’s honestly very amazing. Nature’s glory along with a writer’s thoughts always steals our hearts.
    Actually enjoyed it. Wish you a happy weekend .

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    1. Samyak Singh's avatar

      Thank you so much for such a lovely insight. Hope you’ve a Super Sunday💙💙😊😊

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      1. umrahsania's avatar

        You’re welcome 😊😀

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  6. Sid's avatar

    Mind= sued
    Great poem. It took me a while to understand the beauty of it. But awwweesssommmee ♥️♥️♥️♥️

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    1. Samyak Singh's avatar

      Thank you so much. I hope I learn to make you feel better with my poems someday. Honest+ witty= YOU.😃💙💙💙💙

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      1. Sid's avatar

        😂😂😂 It’s a pleasure. 💙💙
        Also, funny + idk= you

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  7. aestheticgraphy's avatar

    Acrostic is always amazing to read. Well done 😍♥

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    1. Samyak Singh's avatar

      Thanks for reading 💙💙💙
      Keep up the support 😊😊😊

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  8. Kajal's avatar

    You sue my mind every time.
    Well written.

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    1. Samyak Singh's avatar

      It really means a lot 💙💙😊

      Like

  9. Richa's avatar

    You totally sued my mind. Beauty of nature described by such beautiful words , wonderfully penned ❤❤❤

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    1. Samyak Singh's avatar

      Thanks Richa. The feedback I get from you is precious..love the support ☺️💙💙

      Liked by 2 people

      1. Richa's avatar

        You are always welcome my friend ❤❤❤

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  10. Samyak Singh's avatar

    Thanks Winnie. Grateful for your support 💙💙

    Like

  11. Mia Winhertt's avatar

    I really liked the way you wove out all the lines of the poem around the word “sunrise.” Now that’s a self-imposed restriction you worked with beautifully! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Samyak Singh's avatar

      Such honest insight lightens up my mood. Thank you so much for the support. Means a lot Mia😊😊

      Liked by 1 person

  12. Moushmi Radhanpara's avatar
    Moushmi Radhanpara October 24, 2019 — 12:18 pm

    You speak my mind here, “Entrapping hues, dreaming and lost.” A lovely composition.

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  13. stevescountry's avatar

    Wonderful poem Samyak! I love sunrises while on the lake or on a high hill watching as the sun rises above the distant horizon! So beautiful and captivating. Great idea with an acrostic!😁😸🌞

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    1. Samyak Singh's avatar

      Thank you so much Steve 💙😊😊
      Certainly this autumn breeze is going to make mornings beautiful 💕💕

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      1. stevescountry's avatar

        My pleasure Samyak!😃😺🌞

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