La Liberté

As millets caress my hand,

There comes a thrush,

Wafting along the breeze,

Rests keeping it all hush…

She gulps her treasure,

Winking a cute chirp,

I lunged for a mushy trace,

She grazed off with a twerp.


Recently came up with a prompt on something about birds! They feed off of our palms just an inch away,tasting their food.

Fly off in a whisker but leave their imprints for the rest of our lives. They do… believe me😊
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Thank you😊

42 thoughts on “La Liberté

  1. This is so beautiful. Even I like birds. Excellent rhymes 💛💛

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    1. Thanks dear💙💙
      Birds inspire freedom😍😍

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  2. Beautiful. Loved the line she gulps her treasure

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    1. Thanks for your support dear💕💕
      Glad you understand the meaning so well💙

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      1. My pleasure. Keep blogging

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  3. This is so cute… beautifully written.. Samyak..🙂🌷

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    1. Thanks Sarika 💕
      Been a little late reading your posts. Will get back soon. Holidays started so😊😊💙💙

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      1. .my pleasure dear 🌺. absolutely no problem at all …. Samyak. please enjoy your holidays..🙂

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      2. Wow. It’s good to hear you 💕😊
        Hope you have a great weekend💙💙

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    1. Thank you neighbor 💓😊💕.
      You’ve been the constant 💙💙💙

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    1. Thanks Flor 💕💕💕
      Been a little late reading your posts. Holidays started so…😊😊😄💙

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      1. You’re welcome, Samuak. It happens sometimes to most of us.😀😀. Enjoy your holiday.🧡

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      2. I’m glad you understand 😊😊😊💕

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  4. I love this! 😊💕

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    1. Love your support Winnie 💙💙😊💙

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  5. Absolutely gorgeous – you captured an innocent moment so well

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    1. Thank you Sir 💕😊
      Love your support throughout 💙

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  6. Amazing. I’ve nominated you for the Mystery Blogger Award 😉

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    1. Thank you so much Ayesha. Means a lot to get the nominated😍😍
      Hope you’re having a great week💙💙

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      1. Any time, my friend. You deserve it 🙃

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  7. This is so good…yes very correct they leave imprints for the rest of our lives… 🙂

    Loved it !! 🙂

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    1. Thank you doctor saahab 😍😍
      Aise hi Mann se support kijiye💙💙😊

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  8. heart touching one. Loved the way you interpret your feelings and that moment. ❤❤❤

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    1. Thank you so much for reading 😊😊

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      1. You are always welcome my friend ❤❤❤

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  9. Birds are lovely, indeed! And they can actually teach us so much, if not just calm us! 😄😄

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    1. Yeah you’re right indeed. Thanks for your beautiful insights 💙💙😊😊

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  10. The words are effortlessly carved, touching every nerve in the soul and making it a thrill read, my friend.

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  11. Beautiful poem Samyak, thoroughly enjoyed this! Perhaps because I am a bird lover, but I know the feeling of birds sitting on my hand and getting food, it really does something that is hard to explain, but like you said, leaving an imprint and that is so true. Great work Samyak, keep it up!!😃😺🌞

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    1. Yeah a nature enthusiast would sure know the minute details of the joy they shower upon us. Thank you for your beautiful insights Steve. Really means a lot💓💓

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      1. My pleasure Samyak, always enjoy what you write! I hope your day has been good, mine is just beginning.😃😺🍁🍂

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      2. Yeah amazing to know💚💚💚

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  12. So beautiful poem with beautiful pics

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    1. Thank you so much M’am 😊😊
      Have been around on a vacation so couldn’t catch on to your posts. I’ll read them as it’s over.
      Glad to get your support M’am 💙💙

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      1. Yes,me too on vacation…enjoy your vacation….

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      2. Enjoy to the fullest 💙💙😊

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