Shoved her with a cold blow,
only to strangle her senses,
she gasped for a puff in pain,
for his callous wrath conjured.
An effort to sue up your minds with a micro.
Downtrodden customs still persist with a patriarchial set-up. Still women get flinched with just raise in the voice of men…..till now. Well a shame it is.
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Thank You
Enigmatical 
Samyak, you sewed up her pain and helplessness very well in just a verse.
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I hope it’s not a custom these days…but glad you caught the meaning behind this. You read it and I’m grateful you liked it😊💙
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This micro is going to create big impact on the readers , I must say. 😀😀👌
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Really!!😍😍
I hope in a good way though.. I’m glad you enjoyed it..keep writing amusing stuff!💓💙💓
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Definitely in a good way. In a beautiful way. Yes, you too. Keep supporting, stay connected 🌟 🌸
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You are a genuine reader and it’s great to have such a supporting community. I’ll always akeep the support 😊
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Yes, of course. We should help and support each other as much as we can. It’s a great way. 🌟We should always spread the magic
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Woahhh that’s the way to go.. words will do the magic..
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I quite agree with Preeti… heartfully written Samyak . 👍
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Means a lot Savvy! Grateful for the support😊🤗
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👍🙂
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Wow ! Short but very deep one 😍
Had to check dictionary though
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Thank you so much bhai💓💓
Words take you to places,dictionary is one of those I guess!
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How noble, such a beautifully written piece. The imagery is vividly expressed.
😇🙏🌸
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Thank you Yonnie..your insights matter a lot!😊💙💓💙
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How thoughtful, you are certainly welcome. 😊🌸
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Absolute pleasure!💓💓
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Thank you 😊🌸
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Soo strong, I love it 💙💙💙💙
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Glad you read it😍😍😍
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Too deep 👌
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You’re very kind neighbor..thank you💙💓💙
All the best for your exams!
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Thanks Sam 😊❤
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This is a very thoughtful and important micro💚💚
It’s good you gave an explanation of it because it gave me the deepness of this verse.
It’s sad sad women still go through stuff like this n I’m glad you’ve put it out there.
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It’s poignant and am glad it touched you..thanks for being a genuine reader Joel..thank you so much 😍💓💙💓
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You’re welcome Sam💚
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Kind of you to say so😊
Thanks for taking the interest💓💓💓
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Well she’s expected to bend and bow, otherwise meet the wrath and those that see, think there’s nothing wrong but when reversed, heaven falls.
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And that’s pity for such a hypocrite world. Kind on the outside, callous on the inside. Am glad you caught the meaning behind this. Thank you Flor for being a constant support from the beginning😊💙💓💙
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You’re highly welcome.💙
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It’s amazing 💝
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Thank you for reading! Take care💙
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Strong and beautiful words🙆
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I’m happy you read it!😍😍😍
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Amazing 🌷… you always bring out…such issues which are so deep-rooted in our society…
Well done 👏👌🌹
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It’s a delight to hear from you! Glad you fetched the meaning behind this!💓😊😊
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👍☺️
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Remarkable!
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I’m glad you read!😊
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Beautifully explained the pain of her within very few lines
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I’m so glad you got the meaning! 💓
Thank You for reading!😊😊
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I nominated you for the liebster awards .https://wp.me/pbadpi-af
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Awww that’s so kind of you!!
Congratulations on the award!!
Really appreciate your nomination..Thank you so much.
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Most welcome 🙏😊
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I absolutely love this 🙂 very deep …brother
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Thanks bro.means a lot when you drop your words here!😊💙
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Love how you illustrate violence in deep and gentle but strong and artistic way. A true gentleman 🙂
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Thank you so much Jess💓
Appreciate that you caught the theme…indeed it’s a foul practice still prevalent..we need to forego it with the help of our voice!😊
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or with pen and paper (or in our case, our blogs 😀 )
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Yeah let’s see if it makes any difference!
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😂
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So much said in so few lines. well done, Smayak!! This was very thoughtful!
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I’ve grown into these lines since I wrote them.. Thanks a lot. 😊
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This micro represents a macro issue.
And this coming from a man means a lot more👏👏👏
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Ohh that’s so humble of you!😊😊😊🤗
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😊😊
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Short and deep ✌🏻
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Means a lot..thank you💙
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Good to see guys like you helping to change the general mindset! 👏
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Let’s see if it brings even a bit of a change!😊
Thanks a lot..really appreciate your read💙
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wonderful words samyak…thanks for share
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Thanks a lot Obaid bhai💙💙🤗
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pleasure …..
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Damn beautiful – great choice of words too
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You are magnificent in lending us the support!😊💓💙
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You too as well 🌸😊
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A short cute poem 😉
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It really means a lot!😊
Thanks for reading😃
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🙂
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Hey! I nominated you for liebster award.
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Thank you so much for this kind gesture!💓 Love the support and nominations I get from you all.
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So touching!
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Means a lot to hear from you! I’m Very happy🤗🤗😍
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My pleasure 😊😊
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Great 👌👍
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Thank you for passing by! Keep the support and stay connected!😊👏
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Wonderfully written Samyak! So much said in so few words, quite amazing! Hard to believe that such still goes on, it needs to stop. Thanks for putting this out. I’m late i know, sorry about that. Have a great day!
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It’s totally fine Steve…matter a lot to me when you make an effort to read my stuff..thank you😊😊💙
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I always enjoy it, just a little slow getting there sometimes! I need to do better. Hope your day has been great!😃😺🌞
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Yeah it’s been tiring before the weekend! Now it’s time to relax and write more and more!💛😃
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Hey that’s it! Writing is a great way to relax, at least I find it is.😁🌞🍁🍂
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Yeah it is and it’s fun doing so!💙💙 Have a great day Steve!!😊😊
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Thanks so much! Off to a rough start so things will get better!😁😸🌞👍
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Eventually they’ll turn out to be great!💙💙
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Absolutely right! Don’t stop just because the day doesn’t start out quite the way we want. Keep going, it will get better.😃🌞
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That’s right Steve. Your words are so calming 💙💙💙
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Thanks so much Samyak! Hmm, I have never thought about it that way, yet several people have said the same thing lately.🤔🙂🌞
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Yes you believe then and you’ll find out about it being true😊💙
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Thanks again, quite interesting.🙂🌞
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Very deep
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Thanks for reading…appreciate your support💞💞
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My pleasure 😊
Have a great day
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Brilliantly written 🖤
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Thank you so much for reading. Means a lot to come across your blog. 😊💙💙
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No problem! Your posts are great! I only hope mine don’t disappoint! 👍🖤
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Thanks a lot. They only do one thing- amuse me💕
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Oh I’m sure they do more than that! You shouldn’t under estimate your talent! 😁🖤
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Yes that’s a given fact. But your work is admirable as well.💕
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Thank you, you’re very kind 🖤
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You too 💕
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I don’t have words to say. You always amazed me. ❤❤❤
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Glad to hear from you Richa💙💙😊
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❤❤❤
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