Sullen

Shoved her with a cold blow,

only to strangle her senses,

she gasped for a puff in pain,

for his callous wrath conjured.


An effort to sue up your minds with a micro.

Downtrodden customs still persist with a patriarchial set-up. Still women get flinched with just raise in the voice of men…..till now. Well a shame it is.

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Thank You

103 thoughts on “Sullen

  1. Samyak, you sewed up her pain and helplessness very well in just a verse.

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    1. I hope it’s not a custom these days…but glad you caught the meaning behind this. You read it and I’m grateful you liked itπŸ˜ŠπŸ’™

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  2. This micro is going to create big impact on the readers , I must say. πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ‘Œ

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    1. Really!!😍😍
      I hope in a good way though.. I’m glad you enjoyed it..keep writing amusing stuff!πŸ’“πŸ’™πŸ’“

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      1. Definitely in a good way. In a beautiful way. Yes, you too. Keep supporting, stay connected 🌟 🌸

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      2. You are a genuine reader and it’s great to have such a supporting community. I’ll always akeep the support 😊

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      3. Yes, of course. We should help and support each other as much as we can. It’s a great way. 🌟We should always spread the magic

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      4. Woahhh that’s the way to go.. words will do the magic..

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    2. I quite agree with Preeti… heartfully written Samyak . πŸ‘

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      1. Means a lot Savvy! Grateful for the supportπŸ˜ŠπŸ€—

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  3. Wow ! Short but very deep one 😍

    Had to check dictionary though

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    1. Thank you so much bhaiπŸ’“πŸ’“
      Words take you to places,dictionary is one of those I guess!

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  4. How noble, such a beautifully written piece. The imagery is vividly expressed.
    πŸ˜‡πŸ™πŸŒΈ

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    1. Thank you Yonnie..your insights matter a lot!πŸ˜ŠπŸ’™πŸ’“πŸ’™

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      1. How thoughtful, you are certainly welcome. 😊🌸

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      2. Absolute pleasure!πŸ’“πŸ’“

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      3. Thank you 😊🌸

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  5. Soo strong, I love it πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™

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    1. Glad you read it😍😍😍

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    1. You’re very kind neighbor..thank youπŸ’™πŸ’“πŸ’™
      All the best for your exams!

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      1. Thanks Sam 😊❀

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  6. This is a very thoughtful and important microπŸ’šπŸ’š
    It’s good you gave an explanation of it because it gave me the deepness of this verse.
    It’s sad sad women still go through stuff like this n I’m glad you’ve put it out there.

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    1. It’s poignant and am glad it touched you..thanks for being a genuine reader Joel..thank you so much πŸ˜πŸ’“πŸ’™πŸ’“

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      1. You’re welcome SamπŸ’š

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      2. Kind of you to say so😊
        Thanks for taking the interestπŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“

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  7. Well she’s expected to bend and bow, otherwise meet the wrath and those that see, think there’s nothing wrong but when reversed, heaven falls.

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    1. And that’s pity for such a hypocrite world. Kind on the outside, callous on the inside. Am glad you caught the meaning behind this. Thank you Flor for being a constant support from the beginningπŸ˜ŠπŸ’™πŸ’“πŸ’™

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      1. You’re highly welcome.πŸ’™

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  8. It’s amazing πŸ’

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    1. Thank you for reading! Take careπŸ’™

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  9. Strong and beautiful wordsπŸ™†

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    1. I’m happy you read it!😍😍😍

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  10. Amazing 🌷… you always bring out…such issues which are so deep-rooted in our society…
    Well done πŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸŒΉ

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    1. It’s a delight to hear from you! Glad you fetched the meaning behind this!πŸ’“πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š

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  11. Beautifully explained the pain of her within very few lines

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    1. I’m so glad you got the meaning! πŸ’“
      Thank You for reading!😊😊

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  12. I nominated you for the liebster awards .https://wp.me/pbadpi-af

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    1. Awww that’s so kind of you!!
      Congratulations on the award!!
      Really appreciate your nomination..Thank you so much.

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      1. Most welcome πŸ™πŸ˜Š

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  13. I absolutely love this πŸ™‚ very deep …brother

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    1. Thanks bro.means a lot when you drop your words here!πŸ˜ŠπŸ’™

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  14. Love how you illustrate violence in deep and gentle but strong and artistic way. A true gentleman πŸ™‚

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    1. Thank you so much JessπŸ’“
      Appreciate that you caught the theme…indeed it’s a foul practice still prevalent..we need to forego it with the help of our voice!😊

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      1. or with pen and paper (or in our case, our blogs πŸ˜€ )

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      2. Yeah let’s see if it makes any difference!

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  15. So much said in so few lines. well done, Smayak!! This was very thoughtful!

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    1. I’ve grown into these lines since I wrote them.. Thanks a lot. 😊

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  16. This micro represents a macro issue.
    And this coming from a man means a lot moreπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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    1. Ohh that’s so humble of you!πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ€—

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  17. Short and deep ✌🏻

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  18. Good to see guys like you helping to change the general mindset! πŸ‘

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    1. Let’s see if it brings even a bit of a change!😊
      Thanks a lot..really appreciate your readπŸ’™

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  19. wonderful words samyak…thanks for share

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    1. Thanks a lot Obaid bhaiπŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ€—

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  20. Damn beautiful – great choice of words too

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    1. You are magnificent in lending us the support!πŸ˜ŠπŸ’“πŸ’™

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      1. You too as well 🌸😊

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  21. A short cute poem πŸ˜‰

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    1. It really means a lot!😊
      Thanks for readingπŸ˜ƒ

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  22. Hey! I nominated you for liebster award.

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    1. Thank you so much for this kind gesture!πŸ’“ Love the support and nominations I get from you all.

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    1. Means a lot to hear from you! I’m Very happyπŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ˜

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      1. My pleasure 😊😊

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    1. Thank you for passing by! Keep the support and stay connected!πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘

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  23. Wonderfully written Samyak! So much said in so few words, quite amazing! Hard to believe that such still goes on, it needs to stop. Thanks for putting this out. I’m late i know, sorry about that. Have a great day!

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    1. It’s totally fine Steve…matter a lot to me when you make an effort to read my stuff..thank youπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ’™

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      1. I always enjoy it, just a little slow getting there sometimes! I need to do better. Hope your day has been great!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ΊπŸŒž

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      2. Yeah it’s been tiring before the weekend! Now it’s time to relax and write more and more!πŸ’›πŸ˜ƒ

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      3. Hey that’s it! Writing is a great way to relax, at least I find it is.πŸ˜πŸŒžπŸπŸ‚

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      4. Yeah it is and it’s fun doing so!πŸ’™πŸ’™ Have a great day Steve!!😊😊

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      5. Thanks so much! Off to a rough start so things will get better!πŸ˜πŸ˜ΈπŸŒžπŸ‘

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      6. Eventually they’ll turn out to be great!πŸ’™πŸ’™

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      7. Absolutely right! Don’t stop just because the day doesn’t start out quite the way we want. Keep going, it will get better.πŸ˜ƒπŸŒž

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      8. That’s right Steve. Your words are so calming πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™

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      9. Thanks so much Samyak! Hmm, I have never thought about it that way, yet several people have said the same thing lately.πŸ€”πŸ™‚πŸŒž

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      10. Yes you believe then and you’ll find out about it being trueπŸ˜ŠπŸ’™

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      11. Thanks again, quite interesting.πŸ™‚πŸŒž

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    1. Thanks for reading…appreciate your supportπŸ’žπŸ’ž

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      1. My pleasure 😊
        Have a great day

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  24. Brilliantly written πŸ–€

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    1. Thank you so much for reading. Means a lot to come across your blog. πŸ˜ŠπŸ’™πŸ’™

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      1. No problem! Your posts are great! I only hope mine don’t disappoint! πŸ‘πŸ–€

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      2. Thanks a lot. They only do one thing- amuse meπŸ’•

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      3. Oh I’m sure they do more than that! You shouldn’t under estimate your talent! πŸ˜πŸ–€

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      4. Yes that’s a given fact. But your work is admirable as well.πŸ’•

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      5. Thank you, you’re very kind πŸ–€

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  25. I don’t have words to say. You always amazed me. ❀❀❀

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    1. Glad to hear from you RichaπŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ˜Š

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      1. ❀❀❀

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