Sullen

Shoved her with a cold blow,

only to strangle her senses,

she gasped for a puff in pain,

for his callous wrath conjured.


An effort to sue up your minds with a micro.

Downtrodden customs still persist with a patriarchial set-up. Still women get flinched with just raise in the voice of men…..till now. Well a shame it is.

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Thank You

103 thoughts on “Sullen

  1. Samyak, you sewed up her pain and helplessness very well in just a verse.

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    1. I hope it’s not a custom these days…but glad you caught the meaning behind this. You read it and I’m grateful you liked it๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ’™

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  2. This micro is going to create big impact on the readers , I must say. ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ‘Œ

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    1. Really!!๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
      I hope in a good way though.. I’m glad you enjoyed it..keep writing amusing stuff!๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’“

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      1. Definitely in a good way. In a beautiful way. Yes, you too. Keep supporting, stay connected ๐ŸŒŸ ๐ŸŒธ

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      2. You are a genuine reader and it’s great to have such a supporting community. I’ll always akeep the support ๐Ÿ˜Š

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      3. Yes, of course. We should help and support each other as much as we can. It’s a great way. ๐ŸŒŸWe should always spread the magic

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      4. Woahhh that’s the way to go.. words will do the magic..

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    2. I quite agree with Preeti… heartfully written Samyak . ๐Ÿ‘

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      1. Means a lot Savvy! Grateful for the support๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿค—

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  3. Wow ! Short but very deep one ๐Ÿ˜

    Had to check dictionary though

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    1. Thank you so much bhai๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“
      Words take you to places,dictionary is one of those I guess!

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  4. How noble, such a beautifully written piece. The imagery is vividly expressed.
    ๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ™๐ŸŒธ

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    1. Thank you Yonnie..your insights matter a lot!๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’™

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      1. How thoughtful, you are certainly welcome. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐ŸŒธ

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      2. Absolute pleasure!๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“

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      3. Thank you ๐Ÿ˜Š๐ŸŒธ

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  5. Soo strong, I love it ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™

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    1. Glad you read it๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

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  6. MoonLight ๐Ÿ’ซ August 29, 2019 — 9:10 am

    Too deep ๐Ÿ‘Œ

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    1. You’re very kind neighbor..thank you๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’™
      All the best for your exams!

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      1. Dua Siddiqui ๐Ÿ’ซ August 29, 2019 — 8:13 pm

        Thanks Sam ๐Ÿ˜Šโค

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  7. This is a very thoughtful and important micro๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š
    It’s good you gave an explanation of it because it gave me the deepness of this verse.
    It’s sad sad women still go through stuff like this n I’m glad you’ve put it out there.

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    1. It’s poignant and am glad it touched you..thanks for being a genuine reader Joel..thank you so much ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’“

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      1. You’re welcome Sam๐Ÿ’š

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      2. Kind of you to say so๐Ÿ˜Š
        Thanks for taking the interest๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“

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  8. Well she’s expected to bend and bow, otherwise meet the wrath and those that see, think there’s nothing wrong but when reversed, heaven falls.

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    1. And that’s pity for such a hypocrite world. Kind on the outside, callous on the inside. Am glad you caught the meaning behind this. Thank you Flor for being a constant support from the beginning๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’™

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      1. You’re highly welcome.๐Ÿ’™

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  9. It’s amazing ๐Ÿ’

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    1. Thank you for reading! Take care๐Ÿ’™

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  10. Strong and beautiful words๐Ÿ™†

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    1. I’m happy you read it!๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

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  11. Amazing ๐ŸŒท… you always bring out…such issues which are so deep-rooted in our society…
    Well done ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Œ๐ŸŒน

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    1. It’s a delight to hear from you! Glad you fetched the meaning behind this!๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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  12. Remarkable!

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  13. Beautifully explained the pain of her within very few lines

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    1. I’m so glad you got the meaning! ๐Ÿ’“
      Thank You for reading!๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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  14. I nominated you for the liebster awards .https://wp.me/pbadpi-af

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    1. Awww that’s so kind of you!!
      Congratulations on the award!!
      Really appreciate your nomination..Thank you so much.

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      1. Most welcome ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ˜Š

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  15. I absolutely love this ๐Ÿ™‚ very deep …brother

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    1. Thanks bro.means a lot when you drop your words here!๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ’™

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  16. Love how you illustrate violence in deep and gentle but strong and artistic way. A true gentleman ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Thank you so much Jess๐Ÿ’“
      Appreciate that you caught the theme…indeed it’s a foul practice still prevalent..we need to forego it with the help of our voice!๐Ÿ˜Š

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      1. or with pen and paper (or in our case, our blogs ๐Ÿ˜€ )

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      2. Yeah let’s see if it makes any difference!

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  17. So much said in so few lines. well done, Smayak!! This was very thoughtful!

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    1. I’ve grown into these lines since I wrote them.. Thanks a lot. ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  18. This micro represents a macro issue.
    And this coming from a man means a lot more๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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    1. Ohh that’s so humble of you!๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿค—

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  19. Short and deep โœŒ๐Ÿป

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  20. Good to see guys like you helping to change the general mindset! ๐Ÿ‘

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    1. Let’s see if it brings even a bit of a change!๐Ÿ˜Š
      Thanks a lot..really appreciate your read๐Ÿ’™

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  21. wonderful words samyak…thanks for share

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    1. Thanks a lot Obaid bhai๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿค—

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      1. pleasure …..

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  22. Damn beautiful – great choice of words too

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    1. You are magnificent in lending us the support!๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’™

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      1. You too as well ๐ŸŒธ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  23. A short cute poem ๐Ÿ˜‰

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    1. It really means a lot!๐Ÿ˜Š
      Thanks for reading๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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  24. Hey! I nominated you for liebster award.

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    1. Thank you so much for this kind gesture!๐Ÿ’“ Love the support and nominations I get from you all.

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    1. Means a lot to hear from you! I’m Very happy๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜

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      1. My pleasure ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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  25. Great ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘

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    1. Thank you for passing by! Keep the support and stay connected!๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ‘

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  26. Wonderfully written Samyak! So much said in so few words, quite amazing! Hard to believe that such still goes on, it needs to stop. Thanks for putting this out. I’m late i know, sorry about that. Have a great day!

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    1. It’s totally fine Steve…matter a lot to me when you make an effort to read my stuff..thank you๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ’™

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      1. I always enjoy it, just a little slow getting there sometimes! I need to do better. Hope your day has been great!๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜บ๐ŸŒž

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      2. Yeah it’s been tiring before the weekend! Now it’s time to relax and write more and more!๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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      3. Hey that’s it! Writing is a great way to relax, at least I find it is.๐Ÿ˜๐ŸŒž๐Ÿ๐Ÿ‚

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      4. Yeah it is and it’s fun doing so!๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™ Have a great day Steve!!๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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      5. Thanks so much! Off to a rough start so things will get better!๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ธ๐ŸŒž๐Ÿ‘

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      6. Eventually they’ll turn out to be great!๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™

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      7. Absolutely right! Don’t stop just because the day doesn’t start out quite the way we want. Keep going, it will get better.๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐ŸŒž

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      8. That’s right Steve. Your words are so calming ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™

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      9. Thanks so much Samyak! Hmm, I have never thought about it that way, yet several people have said the same thing lately.๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ™‚๐ŸŒž

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      10. Yes you believe then and you’ll find out about it being true๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ’™

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      11. Thanks again, quite interesting.๐Ÿ™‚๐ŸŒž

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    1. Thanks for reading…appreciate your support๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž

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      1. My pleasure ๐Ÿ˜Š
        Have a great day

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  27. Brilliantly written ๐Ÿ–ค

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    1. Thank you so much for reading. Means a lot to come across your blog. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™

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      1. No problem! Your posts are great! I only hope mine don’t disappoint! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ–ค

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      2. Thanks a lot. They only do one thing- amuse me๐Ÿ’•

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      3. Oh I’m sure they do more than that! You shouldn’t under estimate your talent! ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ–ค

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      4. Yes that’s a given fact. But your work is admirable as well.๐Ÿ’•

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      5. Thank you, you’re very kind ๐Ÿ–ค

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  28. I don’t have words to say. You always amazed me. โคโคโค

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    1. Glad to hear from you Richa๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ˜Š

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      1. โคโคโค

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