Insomniac

To the avenue of dreams,

I behold in reverence,

May all the perils fade,

Well that turns out a pretence..

Cluttered on the floor,

Counting the puzzle pieces,

It could be my way out,

To mend those alluring greases..

Shrugging them off I head,

Caressing the trauma,

Night crawled deep,

Out of breath in a dilemma..

To all those who shriek,

Moaning out of dread,

Reminisce the longing souls,

Who shower upon you,love on a featherbed.


Solitude makes up for a fiery story, it takes us up for a heavenly ride..better be it enigma than euphoria or vice- versa, it tails along for the rest of the day..

Am effort to sue up your minds with a poetry..on outstation ride through the night.πŸ˜ƒ

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Thank You.

73 thoughts on “Insomniac

  1. Outstanding work.. Samyak…this dilemma is so relatable 😊

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    1. Im grateful to get your support! It’s unbridledπŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ’™

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      1. It is always my pleasure to read πŸ™‚

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      2. You’re very kind m’am!πŸ’™

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  2. ” out of breath in dilemma…”. This is so me many a time…. well penned Samyak!

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    1. Everyone’s story I guess😌
      Either someone hides it or unleashes it in other forms. Here I used a poem. Glad you read m’am. It’s wonderful to get your constant support!πŸ˜ŒπŸ€—

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  3. Dua Siddiqui πŸ’« September 5, 2019 — 8:56 am

    Well penned Sam, it’s outstanding πŸ‘ŒπŸ’ž

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    1. You’re a wonderful support, neighbor!πŸ’“πŸ˜Š
      Thank you so muchπŸ€—

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      1. Dua Siddiqui πŸ’« September 6, 2019 — 8:37 am

        πŸ˜ŠπŸ’ž

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      2. Dua Siddiqui πŸ’« September 6, 2019 — 9:09 am

        Take good care of yourself ☺

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      3. You too and keep writing..πŸ’“

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      4. Dua Siddiqui πŸ’« September 6, 2019 — 1:28 pm

        😊😊

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  4. I love this one ! (the others too, of course – I’m tired of my English… ) πŸ™‚

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    1. Hahaha..thanks for reading…your english is good enough to spark an interest among many!! 😊😊

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      1. Thank you ! It’s a question of feeling, I do not have English “in the ear” and a dictator it always offers 5 or 6 possible words …. Then I navigate in the words πŸ˜€

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  5. This one is exceptional and remarkable nice work !!!!πŸ‘πŸ˜Š

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    1. It’s so nice to hear from you.😊
      Thank you so much for reading..a loyal reader you’re🀘😌

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      1. Oh thank you so much 😊
        And ya it’s my pleasure 😊😊

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      2. Keep the support onn😊🀘

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      3. Thanks again !! And it’s my pleasure 😊😊😊

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  6. Hey nominated for you Liebster Award

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    1. Thank you so much for the nomination!πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—
      Feel humbled by the support you give. Let me pen down an award post apart from my originals!πŸ’™

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  7. Don’t have much to say, but I love this poem. The picture in cover is just as beautiful.

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    1. Wow that’s so nice to hear! Actually it was a stroll past midnight!! Streetlights looked quite nice and hence clicked them!πŸ’™πŸ’™
      Thanks Jess!! A constant you’reπŸ’“πŸ’“

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  8. well written Samyak….nice share

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    1. Thanks Obaid bhai.πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ’“

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  9. Wonderful poem Samyak! You so vividly express your thoughts in such an amazing way, a joy to read!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ΊπŸ‘

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    1. You’re really a kind soul if you enjoy my write-ups. Thank you for always being there!πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ˜ƒ

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      1. My pleasure Samyak! Hope you have a great weekend!πŸ˜πŸ˜ΈπŸŒžπŸπŸ‚

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    1. Thank you so much for reading!πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

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  10. Heyy samyak I have nominated you for the liebster award please do have a look 😊😊

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    1. Woahhh!!! Thank you soooo much!πŸ’™πŸ’™
      I’ve been short on writing award posts..hopefully I’ll write them. πŸ˜…

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      1. It’s my absolute pleasure 😊😊

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  11. Excellent poem.. Rightly portrayed the condition of mind.

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    1. Thank you and keep supporting…I need to write more and more nowπŸ˜ƒπŸ’™πŸ’™

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  12. Love the choice of words and the flow of your verse ….., beautiful

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    1. Your insights mean a lot. Thank you for being the support!πŸ’™πŸ˜Š

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  13. Off late I have realised, solitude makes us do a lot of things. Well done Samyak! You are weaving great poetries. Also, I love the picture.

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    1. Gives us some introspection timeπŸ’™
      Thanks for reading!😊

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  14. Dear Samyak, would love to share a special message ….

    Kindly email me:
    YBP@passcodelove.com
    OR
    may I please know your email add?

    THANKS WITH MUCH LOVE!!!
    β€οΈπŸ’œπŸ’šπŸ’›πŸ’™πŸ’œπŸ’›πŸ’šπŸ’šβ€οΈπŸ’œ

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      1. Thanks so much! Sent you mail!! ❀️

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  15. Really felt this πŸ™‚ great job with the creativity and descriptions!

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    1. Feels good when you appreciate it😊😊

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  16. The spark in your poem is worth mentioning – there is hope – there is resurrection

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    1. Your words mean a lot SirπŸ’•πŸ˜Š

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  17. This is truly exceptional and beautiful! 😊❀️️

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  18. I absolutely love this πŸ’œπŸ§‘

    Very great choice of words ☺ used dictionary multiple times….infact downloaded oneπŸ˜€

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    1. It’s good you’re learning something out of my pieces πŸ˜ƒπŸ’™

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      1. πŸ˜€πŸ˜€ yasss πŸ’›

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  19. I can relate to itπŸ‘½

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    1. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
      Thanks captain. How you doing??😊😊

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      1. Doing great finally had time to read your work, you are doing improving fastπŸ€—

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      2. That’s so good to know!πŸ’•
        Hope you’re having a nice lovely morning!πŸ˜„πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š

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  20. Wonderfully penned. You always amazed me through your writings. Loved it. Keep writing keep inspiring us. ❀❀❀

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    1. Constant support means a lotπŸ’™πŸ’™

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      1. You are always welcome

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  21. Nice One! I’ve written a few times on Insomnia, too. Sometimes there’s nothing else to do when you can’t sleep!

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    1. Obviously πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“
      The best voices in your head come out at night only. It’s not a disorder btw. I think it’s a blessing when one is in his senses πŸ’™

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  22. Counting the puzzle pieces, it could be my way out..
    I believe we we all go through this phase at some point of time in our life.

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    1. Yeah no wonder nights become a witness of so many emotional breakouts…in the form of poetry could one of them.
      Thanks for reading M’am πŸ’•πŸ˜Š

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  23. Well written piece there.

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    1. Thanks a lot for reading. Nice to come across your blogπŸ˜ŠπŸ’™

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      1. And am much grateful to have come across yours…Thank you.

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      2. You’re very kind to say so.πŸ’•

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