To the avenue of dreams,
I behold in reverence,
May all the perils fade,
Well that turns out a pretence..
Cluttered on the floor,
Counting the puzzle pieces,
It could be my way out,
To mend those alluring greases..
Shrugging them off I head,
Caressing the trauma,
Night crawled deep,
Out of breath in a dilemma..
To all those who shriek,
Moaning out of dread,
Reminisce the longing souls,
Who shower upon you,love on a featherbed.
Solitude makes up for a fiery story, it takes us up for a heavenly ride..better be it enigma than euphoria or vice- versa, it tails along for the rest of the day..
Am effort to sue up your minds with a poetry..on outstation ride through the night.๐
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Thank You.
Outstanding work.. Samyak…this dilemma is so relatable ๐
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Im grateful to get your support! It’s unbridled๐ค๐ค๐
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It is always my pleasure to read ๐
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You’re very kind m’am!๐
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” out of breath in dilemma…”. This is so me many a time…. well penned Samyak!
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Everyone’s story I guess๐
Either someone hides it or unleashes it in other forms. Here I used a poem. Glad you read m’am. It’s wonderful to get your constant support!๐๐ค
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Well penned Sam, it’s outstanding ๐๐
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You’re a wonderful support, neighbor!๐๐
Thank you so much๐ค
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Take good care of yourself โบ
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You too and keep writing..๐
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Yep sure ๐ค
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I love this one ! (the others too, of course – I’m tired of my English… ) ๐
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Hahaha..thanks for reading…your english is good enough to spark an interest among many!! ๐๐
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Thank you ! It’s a question of feeling, I do not have English “in the ear” and a dictator it always offers 5 or 6 possible words …. Then I navigate in the words ๐
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This one is exceptional and remarkable nice work !!!!๐๐
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It’s so nice to hear from you.๐
Thank you so much for reading..a loyal reader you’re๐ค๐
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Oh thank you so much ๐
And ya it’s my pleasure ๐๐
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Keep the support onn๐๐ค
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Of course ๐๐
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Thanks. Even I’ll do๐ค
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Thanks again !! And it’s my pleasure ๐๐๐
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Hey nominated for you Liebster Award
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Thank you so much for the nomination!๐ค๐ค๐ค
Feel humbled by the support you give. Let me pen down an award post apart from my originals!๐
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Don’t have much to say, but I love this poem. The picture in cover is just as beautiful.
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Wow that’s so nice to hear! Actually it was a stroll past midnight!! Streetlights looked quite nice and hence clicked them!๐๐
Thanks Jess!! A constant you’re๐๐
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well written Samyak….nice share
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Thanks Obaid bhai.๐ค๐ค๐
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Wonderful poem Samyak! You so vividly express your thoughts in such an amazing way, a joy to read!๐๐บ๐
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You’re really a kind soul if you enjoy my write-ups. Thank you for always being there!๐๐๐
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My pleasure Samyak! Hope you have a great weekend!๐๐ธ๐๐๐
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Really heartfelt!
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Thank you so much for reading!๐๐
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Heyy samyak I have nominated you for the liebster award please do have a look ๐๐
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Woahhh!!! Thank you soooo much!๐๐
I’ve been short on writing award posts..hopefully I’ll write them. ๐
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It’s my absolute pleasure ๐๐
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Excellent poem.. Rightly portrayed the condition of mind.
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Thank you and keep supporting…I need to write more and more now๐๐๐
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Love the choice of words and the flow of your verse ….., beautiful
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Your insights mean a lot. Thank you for being the support!๐๐
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My pleasure
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Off late I have realised, solitude makes us do a lot of things. Well done Samyak! You are weaving great poetries. Also, I love the picture.
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Gives us some introspection time๐
Thanks for reading!๐
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Dear Samyak, would love to share a special message ….
Kindly email me:
YBP@passcodelove.com
OR
may I please know your email add?
THANKS WITH MUCH LOVE!!!
โค๏ธ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โค๏ธ๐
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Yeah sure!๐
Here’s mine: samyaksinghth@gmail.com
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Thanks so much! Sent you mail!! โค๏ธ
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Really felt this ๐ great job with the creativity and descriptions!
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Feels good when you appreciate it๐๐
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The spark in your poem is worth mentioning – there is hope – there is resurrection
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Your words mean a lot Sir๐๐
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My absolute pleasure
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This is truly exceptional and beautiful! ๐โค๏ธ๏ธ
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I absolutely love this ๐๐งก
Very great choice of words โบ used dictionary multiple times….infact downloaded one๐
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It’s good you’re learning something out of my pieces ๐๐
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๐๐ yasss ๐
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I can relate to it๐ฝ
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Thanks captain. How you doing??๐๐
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Doing great finally had time to read your work, you are doing improving fast๐ค
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That’s so good to know!๐
Hope you’re having a nice lovely morning!๐๐๐
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You too:)
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Wonderfully penned. You always amazed me through your writings. Loved it. Keep writing keep inspiring us. โคโคโค
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Constant support means a lot๐๐
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You are always welcome
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Nice One! I’ve written a few times on Insomnia, too. Sometimes there’s nothing else to do when you can’t sleep!
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Obviously ๐๐๐
The best voices in your head come out at night only. It’s not a disorder btw. I think it’s a blessing when one is in his senses ๐
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Counting the puzzle pieces, it could be my way out..
I believe we we all go through this phase at some point of time in our life.
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Yeah no wonder nights become a witness of so many emotional breakouts…in the form of poetry could one of them.
Thanks for reading M’am ๐๐
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Well written piece there.
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Thanks a lot for reading. Nice to come across your blog๐๐
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And am much grateful to have come across yours…Thank you.
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You’re very kind to say so.๐
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