Samyak Singh41 Comments on Shimmering ride

Shimmering ride

Stranded at the shore,

Unbridled ecstasy grips me,

Negating the smokes of yore

Ruling the world, we accost

I somehow muster the strength,

Strolling down a squashy length

Entrapping hues, dreaming and lost.

An effort to sue up your minds with an acrostic!

SUNRISE is always fixating…on behalf of all those who can’t have this beauty to behold.

Hope you all relate to it well..and suggest me some more forms of poetry I should try out…!!🤔

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Thank you😊

41 thoughts on “Shimmering ride”

  1. Motivational diaries October 5, 2019 — 6:04 am

    This was fantabulous !!! 💙💙

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      Samyak Singh October 5, 2019 — 6:42 am

      Thanks a lot for the motivation. Always tops it all😍😍

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      1. Motivational diaries October 5, 2019 — 6:42 am

        Haha !! It’s my absolute pleasure samyak 😊😊😊

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  2. Dreamer ❤ October 5, 2019 — 9:57 am

    Nicely written ✌🏻

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      Samyak Singh October 5, 2019 — 10:02 am

      Means a lot.💙💙
      Thank you😊

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  3. Sadia Noor October 5, 2019 — 10:12 am

    This was superb and beautifully penned. Selection of words is very good.
    Hey! Why don’t you’re writing on night.

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      Samyak Singh October 5, 2019 — 10:43 am

      Thank you so much 💙💙
      Glad to get your advice. Nights are fabulous. Will figure out about nights soon. Keep the support 😊😊💕

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      1. Sadia Noor October 5, 2019 — 1:42 pm

        Yeah! Good Luck! 😊

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  4. Dua Siddiqui October 5, 2019 — 12:20 pm

    Beautifully penned work Sam, this is outstanding ❤

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      Samyak Singh October 5, 2019 — 12:55 pm

      Thank you neighbor. You’ve been awesome since forever 💕💕💕

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      1. Dua Siddiqui October 5, 2019 — 12:56 pm

        😀☺

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      Samyak Singh October 6, 2019 — 4:00 am

      Thanks Sarika for reading this. Means a lot💙💙💙

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  8. Umrah Sania October 6, 2019 — 1:21 am

    What a beautiful poem??. It’s honestly very amazing. Nature’s glory along with a writer’s thoughts always steals our hearts.
    Actually enjoyed it. Wish you a happy weekend .

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      Samyak Singh October 6, 2019 — 3:59 am

      Thank you so much for such a lovely insight. Hope you’ve a Super Sunday💙💙😊😊

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      1. Umrah Sania October 6, 2019 — 4:45 am

        You’re welcome 😊😀

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  9. Sid October 6, 2019 — 7:15 am

    Mind= sued
    Great poem. It took me a while to understand the beauty of it. But awwweesssommmee ♥️♥️♥️♥️

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      Samyak Singh October 6, 2019 — 8:02 am

      Thank you so much. I hope I learn to make you feel better with my poems someday. Honest+ witty= YOU.😃💙💙💙💙

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      1. Sid October 6, 2019 — 9:42 am

        😂😂😂 It’s a pleasure. 💙💙
        Also, funny + idk= you

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  10. Riya Rajayyan October 6, 2019 — 3:22 pm

    Acrostic is always amazing to read. Well done 😍♥

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      Samyak Singh October 7, 2019 — 4:41 am

      Thanks for reading 💙💙💙
      Keep up the support 😊😊😊

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  12. Mermaid October 7, 2019 — 5:24 am

    You sue my mind every time.
    Well written.

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      Samyak Singh October 7, 2019 — 6:25 am

      It really means a lot 💙💙😊

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  13. Richa October 9, 2019 — 12:08 pm

    You totally sued my mind. Beauty of nature described by such beautiful words , wonderfully penned ❤❤❤

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      Samyak Singh October 9, 2019 — 1:51 pm

      Thanks Richa. The feedback I get from you is precious..love the support ☺️💙💙

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      1. Richa October 9, 2019 — 2:34 pm

        You are always welcome my friend ❤❤❤

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    Samyak Singh October 9, 2019 — 3:10 pm

    Thanks Winnie. Grateful for your support 💙💙

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  15. Mia Winhertt October 15, 2019 — 6:09 pm

    I really liked the way you wove out all the lines of the poem around the word “sunrise.” Now that’s a self-imposed restriction you worked with beautifully! 🙂

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      Samyak Singh October 15, 2019 — 6:22 pm

      Such honest insight lightens up my mood. Thank you so much for the support. Means a lot Mia😊😊

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  16. Moushmi Radhanpara October 24, 2019 — 12:18 pm

    You speak my mind here, “Entrapping hues, dreaming and lost.” A lovely composition.

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  17. stevescountry November 1, 2019 — 4:05 pm

    Wonderful poem Samyak! I love sunrises while on the lake or on a high hill watching as the sun rises above the distant horizon! So beautiful and captivating. Great idea with an acrostic!😁😸🌞

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      Samyak Singh November 1, 2019 — 5:10 pm

      Thank you so much Steve 💙😊😊
      Certainly this autumn breeze is going to make mornings beautiful 💕💕

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      1. stevescountry November 1, 2019 — 7:42 pm

        My pleasure Samyak!😃😺🌞

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