Why would this verse turn so barren ?
With the pink smudged on an arterial wall
Lost in a battle sans wagon
growing into a crippled nightfall
drenched in those bubbles oozing out
witnessed by those iridescent eyes
Blown away by a storm of doubt
sun sets at the end of fervour lies
Sequent growls of a crescent moon
brims up the intertwined souls
forging a seamless merry tune
And a deafening loopholes
I stroll down the sunset boulevard
lenses entrapping the hues off guard.
An effort to sue up your minds with a sonnet. We all have a knack of getting stunned at pink sunsets and yet again I was. There’s a quiz I should wage upon I guessš :-
That how many love stories have been weaved in those clichƩd sunsets?
(Atleast one out of 3 young- bloods have this tendency to cherish the setting sun with their love by their side..š)
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Thank Youš
Enigmatical 
Wow!! Romantic!š
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Thanks a lot for being a genuine reader..šš¤š»
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It’s beautiful! And yes I wish to experience that someday too.
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Yeah get to the point and wait for your shehenshah…ššš
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Wow these 14 lines are more than just lines. Beautiful. ā¤ā¤ā¤
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Love the support I get from you.. Keep reading and keep shiningšš
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I’m always here. Keep writing and keep motivating us
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Thanks a lot Richaš
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You are always welcome. Need help, How to check your comments in spam?
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Is these pictures are clicked by you?
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Yeah the first one. Sunset pics are the one by me..šš
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Beautiful. You have a hidden inner photographer. ā¤ā¤ā¤keep clicking always
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Sorry. I think it’s my fault. Will you please tell me how and where to check spam folder because my email spam folder is empty. Sorry for the trouble again my friend.
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No not the email..go to comments section on the WordPress app..there you will find out the spam comments.
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This is beautifully penned š
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You support me so much..it makes me think you’re the best neighbor I got!š
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That’s because you are the sweetest š
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Eid Mubarak neighbor…cherish,live, and love the dreams coming your wayššš
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Thankyou and same to you, thankyou for being so nice šāŗ
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Stay happy neighbor..šš
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True and beautiful. ššššš„°š
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That’s right Mr. Witty!!ššš
Keep the shine rising!š
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Beautifully written Samyak, very captivating, going past the mind and into the heart! I long for that time with a certain someone by my side and a beautiful sunset together. Hope you have had a great day!ššŗšš³š
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Yeah it’s common for most of us..we all long for that sunset together.
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So close sometimes, but then…
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Yeah I know but they’re beautiful and someone is there meant to be in this world to share that moment with you
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I know the someone, and still wait for her.
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She’s there if she’s meant to be
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Yeah, that’s true enough, it never works to try and push things the way we want. My friends and family has said I’m a failure because it didn’t work. I can’t disagree with that, but I’m still not giving up. I never give up easily.
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Way to go Steve…don’t ever give up on love no matter when it comes to you
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Absolutely maybe!
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If she’s meant to be, she’ll come there
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Splendid
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Sunsets are indeed..š
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Ohmygodš what a mesmerising picture it is!šš
There’s something about sunsets (I donāt know what)… but when sky is in pretty colors, everything around looks so beautiful that it leaves you in awe. Maybe that’s what makes sunsets so romantic and poetic or maybe there’s something else. I don’t know. All I know is sunsets leave me spellbound š
Also my phone camera doesn’t click as beautiful pictures as yours. So sometimes, I secretly wish I could click through my eyesš š
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Sunsets are pretty clichĆ©d moments for love birds and that’s why everyone resonates with it.. Your eyes have the best aperture,focal length pixel range..š
Better take a snap with your eyes and then maybe mail it to me..You know clicking freaks..
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Hahaha… I agree no camera can ever match features of human eyeā š
O yes we are clicking freaks! š
The only problem is… I don’t know how to attach the picture clicked from eye, saved in my brains memory to the Gmail. š If you can help me with that… I promise to send you as many pictures as you want. Hehehe šš
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Wow!! So incredible ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø
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Thanks a lot Jyoti 1ššš
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My pleasure dear Samyak ā¤ļøā¤ļø
You are very talented dear ā¤ļø
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That’s too humble of you dear!š
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Hey, is this you mocking the sun and people who love the sun?
But I still feel that the moon is more romanticized than the sun, and also it is actually better than romanticizing the rains and the moon.
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Ohhh have you ever danced in the rain all drenched.. yeah clouds are grey but they follow romanticism in their own thunderous wayyš.. and I’m not mocking the sun for it shows exquisite range of hues in a single day and this shot was just amazing.. Yes I love the Sun toošš
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I was just kidding..
But yeah, i get the gist.
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The picture and your words paint a romantic painting on a canvas of lavender and azure hues. Simply so beautiful Samyak ā¤ļø
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You said and gave this dimension to this piece…words do have power..I’m certain!š
Thanks for being so humble to read my posts..
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Whenever Nature shows it’s extreme beauty, human beings also become romantic. Anyway, is the picture captured by you?
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The sunset was so charming that I couldn’t hold on and captured it..Thanks for reading and being a charming influence as always..šš
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Wonderful pic šš
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Thank you so much m’am..enjoy the day and stay caringšš
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It’s so nice and the image is beautiful
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I really am grateful for your constant support.. Thanks for being therešššš
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Most welcome
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Humbled šš
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Sheer beauty exploring with depth tanhayee and iridescent thoughts Samyak š
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Absolute pleasure to get your support as always!!ššš
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Wow.. you create such an awesome imagery with your wonderful words…this is absolutely beautiful šŗšŗ
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Thanks for reading and being a genuine support all the way..š
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My pleasure šŗ
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Beautiful and so heart touching… also did you click the picture? It is so soothing to read your poems and this capture, it is the cherry on the cake šš
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Yeah I took it. Couldn’t hold on to the pink sunset.. Thank you so much for being a genuine reader..šš
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Sunset is my favorite colorš
I love the pic and your words equally š
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Thank you so much for these sweet words.. Everyone loves sunsets no matter where they’re..ššš
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Yes,indeed!
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My pleasure.. thankuu š
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This is lovely and romantic… Beautifully penned… Liked it… š
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And a compliment from you is the most sought after one..always look forward to hear from you..šš
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Sure… I will… š
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Youāre incredibly gifted. You move me! And oh, yes to nightfalls, sunsets and love! šš·šš·šš·šš·šš·šš·šš·šš·šš·
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Such humble comment leave a mark to prosper ahead with strength. Love the support from you and it’s really nice to come across your blogs too… they’re stirring šššš
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Nice š
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Thank you so muchšš
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A lovely poem…
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Thank you for your lovely support. I really adore your works. Big fanššš
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Thank you very much!! So grateful for your appreciation…
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Absolute pleasure!! ššÆšÆ
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I appreciate your style of writing,you are specially gifted with this particular style which is different from many others.š
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Absolutely humbled by your comment, Sir!šš
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Thank you very much.Happy blogging.
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Magical, you are becoming better and better at your poems, have a great day and make it meaningfulš
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And whenever you make an effort to support me, it feels wonderful. I’m grateful Captainš¤š¤š
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Happy to stop by my dear friendš¤š¤
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Thank you so much Captainš¤š¤
You on Instagram??
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Not for now, i will let you knos when will get back on itšš¤and you are you still there?
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Yeah I’m there..constantš
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