Gloaming-dale

Why would this verse turn so barren ?

With the pink smudged on an arterial wall

Lost in a battle sans wagon

growing into a crippled nightfall

drenched in those bubbles oozing out

witnessed by those iridescent eyes

Blown away by a storm of doubt

sun sets at the end of fervour lies

Sequent growls of a crescent moon

brims up the intertwined souls

forging a seamless merry tune

And a deafening loopholes

I stroll down the sunset boulevard

lenses entrapping the hues off guard.


An effort to sue up your minds with a sonnet. We all have a knack of getting stunned at pink sunsets and yet again I was. There’s a quiz I should wage upon I guessπŸ˜…:-

That how many love stories have been weaved in those clichΓ©d sunsets?

(Atleast one out of 3 young- bloods have this tendency to cherish the setting sun with their love by their side..πŸ˜„)

Nightfalls,sunsets and love: dream for manyπŸ˜„

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Thank YouπŸ™‚

91 thoughts on “Gloaming-dale

  1. Wow!! Romantic!πŸ’•

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    1. Thanks a lot for being a genuine reader..πŸ’™πŸ€˜πŸ»

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  2. It’s beautiful! And yes I wish to experience that someday too.

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    1. Yeah get to the point and wait for your shehenshah…😊😊😊

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  3. Wow these 14 lines are more than just lines. Beautiful. ❀❀❀

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    1. Love the support I get from you.. Keep reading and keep shiningπŸ’™πŸ’™

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      1. I’m always here. Keep writing and keep motivating us

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      2. You are always welcome. Need help, How to check your comments in spam?

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  4. Is these pictures are clicked by you?

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    1. Yeah the first one. Sunset pics are the one by me..πŸ˜ŠπŸ’™

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      1. Beautiful. You have a hidden inner photographer. ❀❀❀keep clicking always

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    2. My comments are going into the spam for some reasons..you check it there please

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      1. Sorry. I think it’s my fault. Will you please tell me how and where to check spam folder because my email spam folder is empty. Sorry for the trouble again my friend.

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      2. No not the email..go to comments section on the WordPress app..there you will find out the spam comments.

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  5. DuaSiddiqui πŸ’« August 11, 2019 — 4:55 pm

    This is beautifully penned πŸ’•

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    1. You support me so much..it makes me think you’re the best neighbor I got!πŸ˜„

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      1. DuaSiddiqui πŸ’« August 11, 2019 — 7:59 pm

        πŸ˜€πŸ˜Š

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      2. DuaSiddiqui πŸ’« August 12, 2019 — 5:07 am

        That’s because you are the sweetest 😊

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      3. Eid Mubarak neighbor…cherish,live, and love the dreams coming your wayπŸ˜ŠπŸ’™πŸ’™

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      4. DuaSiddiqui πŸ’« August 12, 2019 — 6:16 am

        Thankyou and same to you, thankyou for being so nice 😊☺

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      5. Stay happy neighbor..πŸ˜ŠπŸ’™

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      6. DuaSiddiqui πŸ’« August 12, 2019 — 6:51 am

        πŸ˜ŠπŸ’šπŸ’™

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  6. True and beautiful. 😍😍😍😍πŸ₯°πŸ’™

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    1. That’s right Mr. Witty!!πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™
      Keep the shine rising!😊

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  7. Beautifully written Samyak, very captivating, going past the mind and into the heart! I long for that time with a certain someone by my side and a beautiful sunset together. Hope you have had a great day!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ΊπŸŒžπŸŒ³πŸ’š

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    1. Yeah it’s common for most of us..we all long for that sunset together.

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      1. So close sometimes, but then…

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      2. Yeah I know but they’re beautiful and someone is there meant to be in this world to share that moment with you

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      3. I know the someone, and still wait for her.

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      4. She’s there if she’s meant to be

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      5. Yeah, that’s true enough, it never works to try and push things the way we want. My friends and family has said I’m a failure because it didn’t work. I can’t disagree with that, but I’m still not giving up. I never give up easily.

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      6. Way to go Steve…don’t ever give up on love no matter when it comes to you

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  8. If she’s meant to be, she’ll come there

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      1. 😊🌼

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  9. Ohmygod😍 what a mesmerising picture it is!πŸ’–πŸ˜
    There’s something about sunsets (I don’t know what)… but when sky is in pretty colors, everything around looks so beautiful that it leaves you in awe. Maybe that’s what makes sunsets so romantic and poetic or maybe there’s something else. I don’t know. All I know is sunsets leave me spellbound 😍

    Also my phone camera doesn’t click as beautiful pictures as yours. So sometimes, I secretly wish I could click through my eyesπŸ˜…πŸ˜

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    1. Sunsets are pretty clichΓ©d moments for love birds and that’s why everyone resonates with it.. Your eyes have the best aperture,focal length pixel range..πŸ˜…
      Better take a snap with your eyes and then maybe mail it to me..You know clicking freaks..

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      1. Hahaha… I agree no camera can ever match features of human eye✌ 😊

        O yes we are clicking freaks! πŸ˜„
        The only problem is… I don’t know how to attach the picture clicked from eye, saved in my brains memory to the Gmail. πŸ˜… If you can help me with that… I promise to send you as many pictures as you want. Hehehe πŸ˜‰πŸ˜…

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  10. Wow!! So incredible ❀️❀️❀️

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    1. Thanks a lot Jyoti 1πŸ˜ŠπŸ’™πŸ’™

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      1. My pleasure dear Samyak ❀️❀️
        You are very talented dear ❀️

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      2. That’s too humble of you dear!πŸ˜„

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      3. πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ€©

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  11. Hey, is this you mocking the sun and people who love the sun?
    But I still feel that the moon is more romanticized than the sun, and also it is actually better than romanticizing the rains and the moon.

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    1. Ohhh have you ever danced in the rain all drenched.. yeah clouds are grey but they follow romanticism in their own thunderous wayyπŸ˜„.. and I’m not mocking the sun for it shows exquisite range of hues in a single day and this shot was just amazing.. Yes I love the Sun tooπŸ˜ŠπŸ’™

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      1. I was just kidding..
        But yeah, i get the gist.

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  12. The picture and your words paint a romantic painting on a canvas of lavender and azure hues. Simply so beautiful Samyak ❀️

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    1. You said and gave this dimension to this piece…words do have power..I’m certain!😊
      Thanks for being so humble to read my posts..

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  13. Whenever Nature shows it’s extreme beauty, human beings also become romantic. Anyway, is the picture captured by you?

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    1. The sunset was so charming that I couldn’t hold on and captured it..Thanks for reading and being a charming influence as always..πŸ˜ŠπŸ’™

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      1. Wonderful pic πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

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      2. Thank you so much m’am..enjoy the day and stay caringπŸ˜ŠπŸ’™

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  14. It’s so nice and the image is beautiful

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    1. I really am grateful for your constant support.. Thanks for being thereπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ’™πŸ’™

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  15. Sheer beauty exploring with depth tanhayee and iridescent thoughts Samyak πŸ™‚

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    1. Absolute pleasure to get your support as always!!πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ’™

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  16. Wow.. you create such an awesome imagery with your wonderful words…this is absolutely beautiful 🌺🌺

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    1. Thanks for reading and being a genuine support all the way..πŸ’™

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  17. Beautiful and so heart touching… also did you click the picture? It is so soothing to read your poems and this capture, it is the cherry on the cake πŸ˜πŸ’›

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    1. Yeah I took it. Couldn’t hold on to the pink sunset.. Thank you so much for being a genuine reader..πŸ’™πŸ˜Š

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  18. Sunset is my favorite color😍
    I love the pic and your words equally 😊

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    1. Thank you so much for these sweet words.. Everyone loves sunsets no matter where they’re..πŸ’™πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š

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  19. My pleasure.. thankuu 😊

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  20. This is lovely and romantic… Beautifully penned… Liked it… πŸ™‚

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    1. And a compliment from you is the most sought after one..always look forward to hear from you..πŸ˜ŠπŸ’™

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      1. Sure… I will… πŸ™‚

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  21. You’re incredibly gifted. You move me! And oh, yes to nightfalls, sunsets and love! πŸ’•πŸŒ·πŸ’•πŸŒ·πŸ’•πŸŒ·πŸ’•πŸŒ·πŸ’•πŸŒ·πŸ’•πŸŒ·πŸ’•πŸŒ·πŸ’•πŸŒ·πŸ’•πŸŒ·

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    1. Such humble comment leave a mark to prosper ahead with strength. Love the support from you and it’s really nice to come across your blogs too… they’re stirring πŸ˜ŠπŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™

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    1. Thank you so muchπŸ˜ŠπŸ’™

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    1. Thank you for your lovely support. I really adore your works. Big fanπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ƒπŸ’™

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      1. Thank you very much!! So grateful for your appreciation…

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      2. Absolute pleasure!! πŸ’™πŸ’―πŸ’―

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  22. I appreciate your style of writing,you are specially gifted with this particular style which is different from many others.πŸ’•

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    1. Absolutely humbled by your comment, Sir!πŸ’™πŸ˜Š

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      1. Thank you very much.Happy blogging.

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  23. Magical, you are becoming better and better at your poems, have a great day and make it meaningfulπŸ’š

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    1. And whenever you make an effort to support me, it feels wonderful. I’m grateful CaptainπŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ’™

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      1. Happy to stop by my dear friendπŸ€—πŸ€—

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      2. Thank you so much CaptainπŸ€—πŸ€—
        You on Instagram??

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      3. Not for now, i will let you knos when will get back on itπŸ™‚πŸ€—and you are you still there?

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      4. Yeah I’m there..constantπŸ˜ƒ

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