Voices running in my head
Tearing me down in a haste
Blowing up a clamour
Blood simmered beneath my chest.
Reminds me of the spirited day
When we ruled all the way till dawn
Night went past gliding through
While stars glittered on and on
Hung up over the crescent moon
Gradient shadow loomed
Delusional tragedy shimmered through
While the colossal chasm bloomed.
The moon shows it’s lustre and shows us the light whenever it is magically shiny. We all somehow relate our bonding with the moon without it being selfish.
An effort to sue up your minds with a short musing here. Hope you all like it.π
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Thank You
It is beautiful!π
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Too glad you liked it!ππ
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This is beautiful
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Thank you for readingπ
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Awesome…π·
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I’m really glad you read it!ππ
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Always look forward to your writes..had to readβΊοΈ
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Just too humble and yeah you’re very good at it as well. Infact great. I love your ramblings very much!πππ
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Thanks π
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Heartfelt and sweet words. I’ve nominated you, Samyak, for the Mystery Blogger Award which you can view here: https://motivation-environment.com/2019/07/27/my-2nd-mystery-blogger-award-nomination/
Please note that you are not expected to tie yourself down and honor it.
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Thank you so much for the appreciation! It’s always heartening to see the fellow bloggers appreciate and take notice of the world alongside. π Lots of love for you and thanks for the nomination as wellππ
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This is mind blowing
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Thanks for reading dearππ
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Wow!!! $o beautiful β₯οΈ
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Thank you so much Jyoti!ππ
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My pleasure dear β€οΈ
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Woah!π These are some beautifully written linesβ€
And I agree we all somehow share bond with moon. And yeah it happens when at first you’re just admiring the beauty of the moon and then one thought after another, there’s upheaval and all of a sudden you’re in a completely different moodπ
Btw I noticed that you finally decided to give us glimpse of rural bliss you’re enjoy and shared some pictures. Naiceee… ππΈ
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Chanda mama sabse pyare mama ππ
Thank you for encouraging the rural beauty around us!π
Certainly it’s tough to find these days. Thank You soo much for reading.ππ
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Hahaha π O yeah…I don’t know about the rest of the world but we Indians for sure have family bond with Chanda Mamaππ
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Yeah Sentimental India, Incredible India. No wonder we always cling on to our chanda mama at nights to be the sole companion in solitude.ππ
You got such beautiful insights on numerous stuffs! Keep them flowing!ππ₯
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Hehehe… thanks a lot for your kind words!ππΈ
And yes I agree…Chanda mama is the best. You don’t need to say a word and still he knows what you’re feeling and what’s going in your mind just by the way you look up the skyπβ€
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His blessings matter the most!π
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The moon, the shimmering thoughts, and your passion for poetry a deadly combination
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Always a pleasure to hear and get the support from you!ππ
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My pleasure always
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Lovely, This is absolutely beautifully written. Such vivid imagery
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Thanks for your beautiful insight Yonnieππ
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You are certainly welcome! Continue writing, let your pen leak! ππΈ
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Yeah you too!ππ
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Great lines. My mum told me about her childhood. How people on sighting the ‘first moon’ of the month got so excited and chanted moon songs imploring for good fortune in that month.
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Wow sounds too good of a childhood! Had to imagine it all by myself. Thanks for reading !ππ
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You’re welcome, Samyak.
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Like it? I love it.
Though I’d rather prefer Sun, but that is no secret anymore. But the moon is pretty too, and your poetry justifies every inch of beauty!
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Thank you so much for your tremendous support!ππ
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This is amazing! Loved it π
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Thank You!π₯π
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A wonderful poem
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Thanks a lot for reading!ππ
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It’s beautifully written.. Immersive π
Everyone loves moon and the light..poets are just more in love with nights and moon
Like both of us I guess.. π
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Absolutely! Chanda mama is the best and the sole companion at nights of solitude and drowsiness! Thanks for such a beautiful comment.ππ
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My pleasure…Go through my blog alsoβΊ
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My absolute pleasure!
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Wonderfully written poem Samyak! Your descriptive use of words leaves us with a beautiful image that you portrayed. Yes, that moon is quite something indeed. I hope you enjoy your weekend!ππΊ
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You’re such a kind soul on WordPress I’ve ever known to be honest! Thanks a lot Steve for reading and leaving such a beautiful insight here!ππ
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Thank you so very much for saying that Samyak! I must admit I have been getting so much hassles lately about my blog that it makes me want to quit. But then I get some great comments like yours here and I want to keep on writing. Thank you so much for the encouragement!ππΊπ
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Yeah it’s okay to feel a little off some days and that gets to us slowing us down. Actually you just keep writing and you’re good enough to amuse us with your exquisite skills!ππ»ππ»π
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Thanks for that Samyak! I think Ilona quitting her blog kind of hit me too and made me think a bit more about what to do with my blog. But I will keep it up anyway, I still enjoy it and it’s nice to make others smile a bit.ππΊ
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You’re making everyone smile through your writings and in no way close to quitting it!π Keep up and spread magic all across! We sure love your blogs and you know it!π₯ππ
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Thank you so much for your encouraging words Samyak! I have a question, do you have a way to get in touch with Ilona?
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Yeah I have Instagram to get in touch with her if she’s active there
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She changed her email so I have no way to get in touch with her. If you do have contact, please ask her to get in touch with me, thank you so much!!π
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Will do sure if she respondsπ
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Thank you so much Samyak, much appreciated!
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I don’t think she’s active on Instagram! She has deleted her account!
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She seems to be cutting off everything for some reason, I can’t figure why.
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Yeah She’s off from everywhere! Is there anything important? Only of you want to tell
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It’s just Ilona and I were getting along so well and suddenly she’s gone without saying anything, doesn’t really make sense that she wouldn’t tell me what’s going on. The whole thing is making me sick, quite literally. I just wish she had talked, maybe I did something, can’t think of anything though.
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Hope you’re fine but don’t blame yourself out of no reason. You wouldn’t have done anything. When it comes to having a chat with her, wait till she comes and I am sure things will work out for the best for both you!ππππ»
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Thank you so much Samyak, I sure am beating myself up over this. Yeah, I guess I need to wait, be patient and hope that things will yet work out. Just seems so strange. Thanks for your time, I appreciate it. Love can be hard sometimes.ππ
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Just wait and don’t think much on it. You should figure this out after she gets back in touch. Till then just keep writing and amusing us with your words. It’s all gonna end nicelyπ
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Thank you Samyak! I will keep writing. And waiting. And hoping. It will end nicely, I like that thought!ππ
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Yeah sure it will. ππ₯
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ππThanks for the encouragement!! Have to head to work.
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Cool!ππ
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sweet words and poem.
I ‘ve nominated you for the Mystery Blogger Award which you can view here: https://motivation-environment.com/2019/07/27/my-2nd-mystery-blogger-award-nomination/
Please note that you are not expected to tie yourself down and honor it.
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Thank you so much for the comment! And the nomination as wellππ
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you’re welcome π
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Reblogged this on Vijayagiri views.
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Thank you soo much. Much love to youππ
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Beautiful nature, beautiful poem π π π
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Thank you so much and I appreciate your concern and infinite love towards nature.ππ
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Beautiful poem!
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Too glad that you read. Literally I’m a fan of yours!ππ
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Thanks very much!
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Beautiful
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Humbledππππ»
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My pleasure π
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So beautifully penned! ππΌπ
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Humbled to get your support!ππ
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My pleasure! π
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Beautiful βπ»
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Gorgeous
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Thank you sakshi!π
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Most welcome
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I love it. It’s soft and gentle. Romantic.
Anyone here who hates the moon raise your hands so I can chop it off. haha π I can’t bear anyone hating it but I know some do, and I hope they’ll see its beauty soon.
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Moon is the ultimate landlord of love. None can replace it. Chop them off for sureπ
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Great. Great to know that you’re willing to be my partner in crime π
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Absolutely we’ll go on a killing spree ine day…get your arms readyπβοΈ
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It’s so beautifully penned down π π. Really amazing
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You read it and I’m gratefulπ
Thank you so muchπ
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You have given such a sweet, powerful tribute to one of my greatest loves. Thank you ever so deeply Samyak. β€οΈ
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Awww so sweet of youππ
Glad you could relate. I’m so happyππ
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Iβm so happy too! Candidly, I look at the sky and smile in my heart whenever I see the moon! β€οΈ π π πβ€οΈ
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Wow, you have a way with words…ππ
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We share our love and respect for words …. for they help us translate our love to the world! πππππππππππππ
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That’s so generous of youππππ
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Thanks so much Samyak! Love is for all of us to give and receive! β€οΈπππ§‘ππ
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