Downtown we went
Craving for the sunset
That painted our glory
For how cinematic that was
Holding our breath
Looking for magic
Quietly feeling the upsurge
Clouds unveiling the rays
Descending upon our faces
With an evening breeze
Rolling in with our breath
Under the setting sun
Of all other places
It set our souls on fire
Felt like screaming
And wish for the world
To chant with us
Craving for the touch
That healed everything
Never wished to leave undone
Adrenaline gushing in
Facing the eternal bliss
Shedding all fears
We drove back
Waving goodbye to the sun
Seeped in summer breeze
Lost in myriad of thoughts
When door went all banging
Waking me up
From our evening parade
Leaving me grateful
For letting the time to cease.
Oh this was nicely done.
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Glad you had a look.Thanks π€
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You write beautiful – pure talent my friend
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Thank you so much,sirβΊοΈπ
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My absolute pleasure
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Thank you for reading
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My absolute pleasure
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This made me crave a glance at the sunset, the emotions you laid down are so true. Beautiful π
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Thank you so much for reading
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Extremely talented !… Well done. Thanks. I like and I share, take care.
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Absolutely humbled.Thanks for stopping by.
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You ‘ll remember me one day, and you ‘re gonna say : Outosego was right, I shouldn’t be so humble.
Take care Samyak.
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That’s witty.Loved it.π
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It was divine.. time ceased as if time dilation
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I definitely need itπ
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Reblogged this on Outosego and commented:
Awesome !…
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Extremely humbled with your kind gesture even if you really are a Superman.ππ
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This is beautiful!
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Thank you so much for stopping by. π
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Thanks for having a look.π
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Loved the ending π
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Glad you had a look ! Thank you.ππ€π»
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Beautiful poem… ππ
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Extremely humbled by your comment.ππ
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Very nice
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Thanks for stopping by. Really grateful.ππ
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