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Downtown we went

Craving for the sunset

That painted our glory

For how cinematic that was

Holding our breath

Looking for magic

Quietly feeling the upsurge

Clouds unveiling the rays

Descending upon our faces

With an evening breeze

Rolling in with our breath

Under the setting sun

Of all other places

It set our souls on fire

Felt like screaming

And wish for the world

To chant with us

Craving for the touch

That healed everything

Never wished to leave undone

Adrenaline gushing in

Facing the eternal bliss

Shedding all fears

We drove back

Waving goodbye to the sun

Seeped in summer breeze

Lost in myriad of thoughts

When door went all banging

Waking me up

From our evening parade

Leaving me grateful

For letting the time to cease.


27 thoughts on “Closure…

    1. Glad you had a look.Thanks πŸ€—

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  1. You write beautiful – pure talent my friend

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    1. Thank you so much,sirβ˜ΊοΈπŸ’™

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  2. This made me crave a glance at the sunset, the emotions you laid down are so true. Beautiful πŸ’•

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  3. Extremely talented !… Well done. Thanks. I like and I share, take care.

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    1. Absolutely humbled.Thanks for stopping by.

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      1. You ‘ll remember me one day, and you ‘re gonna say : Outosego was right, I shouldn’t be so humble.

        Take care Samyak.

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      2. That’s witty.Loved it.😁

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  4. It was divine.. time ceased as if time dilation

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  5. Reblogged this on Outosego and commented:
    Awesome !…

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    1. Extremely humbled with your kind gesture even if you really are a Superman.πŸ˜πŸ’™

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  6. This is beautiful!

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    1. Thank you so much for stopping by. πŸ™‚

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    1. Thanks for having a look.πŸ’™

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  7. Loved the ending πŸ‘Œ

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    1. Glad you had a look ! Thank you.πŸ™‚πŸ€˜πŸ»

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  8. Beautiful poem… πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

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    1. Extremely humbled by your comment.πŸ™ƒπŸ’™

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    1. Thanks for stopping by. Really grateful.πŸ™‚πŸ’™

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