Trapped in an illicit hoax, jammed in doubts
How/ When/ Why surge infinite doubts.
Bridges pelted, all turned to dust,
Kinships being a valiant alibi amidst frantic doubts.
Too scared of the perilous seclusion
Being shoved in a dungeon better or in well-sheltered doubts?
Be it a withering loss of a shoulder in the rain,
Or a shower of empty hugs and obscure doubts.
“Who shall take charge? Who shall burn the pyre?”
Flames burnt all the discords with camphor scented doubts.
In a shack of curses and maladies together,
“Me, myself and I ” toss-up frugal doubts.
Adequacy sets up a Samyak route for a bird with a broken wing,
For your stories might get buried alone,
six feet under, chirping absurd doubts.
An effort to sue up your mind with a ghazal here..hopefully meeting the necessary criterion and rhyming scheme except the metric (though an English ghazal doesn’t ask for it).
I hope you like it.
Thank you

I love the flow of this beautiful ghazal. Every word has a certain unique tune and allure, Samyak.
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Thanks Vishal. I’m glad you took notice of my craft. Grateful for your constant support!
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Cheerz mate and absolutely love. My only thing was caught in something or the other and been reading blogs after 2 weeks!
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Best wishes to you in all your writing endeavours..💜
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Cheerz!
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I am always towards Ghazals because of urdu words and their flows. You made me feel the same. I loved it.✌❤
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It all needs a liking for new forms of poetry and you certainly display a lot of interest in art and poetries..amazed at your insights and the beautiful support!!
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❤❤❤
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Beautiful ❤️
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Thank you so much💜
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🙂
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I don’t know about the rhyming scheme but you did an excellent job. Keep writing.
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Yes diversifying is the aim..thanks for reading❤️
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Well done, Samyak!
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Thank you Mia. Means a lot ❤️
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Beautiful!
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Thank you Sania
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This is beautiful 💙
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Thank you so much..I’ve not been around lately. How have you been doing?
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I’m good. How are you?
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Not much into writing. Else all fine
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How about you?
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Hm I understand, similar has been the case with me.
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Yeah, entertwined in the shutdown
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Haha yeah.
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