Hung over a string of words,
All ripe and stolen.
Where else than an outdoor?
A realm of stringent competition.
Sun itself chose moon i.e. darkenes over stories..
No winds of change
No frantic ripples of tears,
A lousy display of courage,
Slipping into falsehood.
I like falsehoods,
Don’t know why?
But it intrigues to it’s very meaning.
“Way back a little fellow grabbed a spear,
And went on a killing spree all alone,
Came back reeling with a broken shoulder,
All smeared in blood, torn apart.
Yeah total falsehood here.
To grab a spear,
Mainly to wage his war against sinisters,
Came back reeling because rage took over his breath”,
Yes, it has an edge over all of us
Oblivion has been relevant for years,
All night long, you think
Think about all the convictions,
Laid down truthfully in a manner,
All of a sudden, you get tricked
Perhaps being engrossed is a peril
All in our own efforts, good or evil
Till we get tricked into falsehood.
Staring into my ceiling,
I spread my blanket all over,
Winter and spring brewing a tale
In…..
Falsehood??
Still buying into these tales?
Even a feather drops down,
though weightless.
An effort to sue up your mind with a falsehood laden tale. Hopefully it urges a feeling to stare at your ceiling with a bit of gratitude towards your own self. Take care!
Thank you.
The beauty of this post is beyond words π
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Humbled to hear from you π
Thanks neighborπΈπ
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My pleasure, always there for you β₯
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Thought-provoking!
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Thanks Mia π
Overwhelmed by your insightπ
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I’m starting to realize that we’re all gonna die some day and this is perhaps the only thing I can say ain’t false. But then again, it’s believed that the soul’s immortal so nobody actually “dies” diesπ You’ve proven through your impeccable words that we can never be right, we just become less wrong. This is totally amazing and I look forward to reading more from youβ€π
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Yes, nicely put. You’ve straightaway planned a life of less wrongs! Go ahead, have fun and try to write a little more regularly so that I can binge read all your posts.
Thank you genius ππ
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Haha, my exams are starting in a few days and I have the whole March to myself after they end, and I’ll definition publish more. Like I have a lot if stuff written down, just don’t make time to publish it on the site. My apologiesπ
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Okay..apology accepted..it’s more of an addiction to some of the gems of the game! Can’t hold the temptation to read more from youπ
Keep up and all the best for the exams..
Hopefully you’ll the rock the results as wellπ
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And you are one such gem too! You never fail to sue my mind with your words.
Thank you so muchππΌ
Haha, I hope so too! Though I’m pretty sure that ain’t gonna happen (I’m freaking out over here I’m super behind!)
Looking forward to your next!π
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All the best..you’ll find your wayππ
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I must say that your efforts to sue our mind, work every single time. π
This poem really got me thinking… it’s really difficult nowadays to know what is true and what is false. Everything is buried under multiple layers. And very few people bother to dig deep and look for the truth in a story.
Also, it’s really fascinating to see how people these days, easily believe a lie but aren’t even ready to see the truth. π¬
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We’re all in a race against truth..it’s hard to call out the perfect story. Let alone our career, family, passion all are lost in this search of a story!π
Thanks for reading and I didn’t know how I’m relatable in this aspect.. feels good to write something close to you allππ
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This really got me thinking…read it twice..thrice…
So beautifully done .. Samyak..ππ…
“Even a feather drops down..though weightless”…..Love this..π
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This is soo sweeet M’am ππ
It’s always heartening to get your insights. I feel honoured everytimeπππ
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Always my pleasure dear πΊ
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Wow – so well written –
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Thanks for reading. I’m super gladππ
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My absolute pleasure
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Profound
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Thanks for reading M’am πππ
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You’ve been nominated for the Sunshine Blogger Award! Congratualations!
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Thank you so much girl!πΈπΈ
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My pleasure!β€
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Wonderful poem with a great ending π
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Thank you for reading!!π
Hope you’ve a great day ahead…πβ€οΈπ
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