
Deceitful yet trusted
Famished yet well fed
Grounded yet soaring up high!
Says all about bewilderment.
Mind finds it’s way
Rattled through the dust
Yet gleaming astonishment
Hovers all the way up
Where the ramblings waft through the breeze
Yet at some point
A heavenly atonement draws in
Rising like a phoenix from the ashes
Reconciling my sins I behold again
At the setting sun in paradise
With an unbounded love
The gleamy eyes faded it all away
Enigma took a plunge deep into the horizon
And with an abstruse wish
I pen this down here
Forsaking the dream, I sink
Into this maiden reality!

“The gleamy eyes faded it all away
Enigma took a plunge deep into the horizon”
My favorite line! Well written Samyu ♥
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It’s something which happens everyday! It all fades away when I look into those eyes!💙
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I always, always love the image of a phoenix rising from its ashes. It gives me power, a reader and a writer. Well done Samyak.
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Yeah gives me strength too. It’s so nice to hear from you everytime! Thank you very much!🙂
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It is always my pleasure.
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Beautiful 🌸
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Thank you very much!💙🤘🏻
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good going saale saahab …. keep the shine rising…..
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❤❤
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♥️♥️🙂
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What an motivational read – an amazing piece of work
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Thank you so much Sir for your kind words!!
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My absolute pleasure
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Deep thoughtful, amazing
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Lovely and profound!
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Wow! Means a lot you read it !🤗💙
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🤗💛
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The place I come to just learn and witness the true beauty and depth of English language! King of vocabulary and poems, beautiful! – Cezane
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More than the vocab it’s the depth I look to in my stuff. So thank you so much for such kind words. Certainly not a king of words.🙃💙
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good going saale saahab …. keep the shine rising…..
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Always need your blessings Jija ji😃🤘🏻
Thank you for taking your time out for reading my stuff!💙
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Deep! Loved every line! 👌
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Thank you so much! I’m glad you read this🙂
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I love the flow of your thoughts here. It captures my senses!
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It’s remarkable to get such an appreciation!!Thank you so much for reading💙🙂
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You’re much welcome!
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Thanks a lot for the comment and your read
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