Samyak Singh103 Comments on Sullen

Sullen

Shoved her with a cold blow,

only to strangle her senses,

she gasped for a puff in pain,

for his callous wrath conjured.

An effort to sue up your minds with a micro.

Downtrodden customs still persist with a patriarchial set-up. Still women get flinched with just raise in the voice of men…..till now. Well a shame it is.

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Thank You

103 thoughts on “Sullen”

  1. radhikasreflection August 29, 2019 — 5:00 am

    Samyak, you sewed up her pain and helplessness very well in just a verse.

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      Samyak Singh August 29, 2019 — 5:35 am

      I hope it’s not a custom these days…but glad you caught the meaning behind this. You read it and I’m grateful you liked it😊💙

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  2. Preeti Bhardwaj August 29, 2019 — 5:01 am

    This micro is going to create big impact on the readers , I must say. 😀😀👌

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      Samyak Singh August 29, 2019 — 5:42 am

      Really!!😍😍
      I hope in a good way though.. I’m glad you enjoyed it..keep writing amusing stuff!💓💙💓

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      1. Preeti Bhardwaj August 29, 2019 — 5:43 am

        Definitely in a good way. In a beautiful way. Yes, you too. Keep supporting, stay connected 🌟 🌸

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        Samyak Singh August 29, 2019 — 5:52 am

        You are a genuine reader and it’s great to have such a supporting community. I’ll always akeep the support 😊

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      3. Preeti Bhardwaj August 29, 2019 — 5:54 am

        Yes, of course. We should help and support each other as much as we can. It’s a great way. 🌟We should always spread the magic

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        Samyak Singh August 29, 2019 — 6:02 am

        Woahhh that’s the way to go.. words will do the magic..

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    2. Savvy Raj September 4, 2019 — 5:29 am

      I quite agree with Preeti… heartfully written Samyak . 👍

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        Samyak Singh September 4, 2019 — 8:44 am

        Means a lot Savvy! Grateful for the support😊🤗

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  3. Accidental Blogger August 29, 2019 — 7:04 am

    Wow ! Short but very deep one 😍

    Had to check dictionary though

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      Samyak Singh August 29, 2019 — 8:37 am

      Thank you so much bhai💓💓
      Words take you to places,dictionary is one of those I guess!

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  4. inhiscare753 August 29, 2019 — 7:15 am

    How noble, such a beautifully written piece. The imagery is vividly expressed.
    😇🙏🌸

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      Samyak Singh August 29, 2019 — 7:56 pm

      Thank you Yonnie..your insights matter a lot!😊💙💓💙

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      1. inhiscare753 August 30, 2019 — 2:13 am

        How thoughtful, you are certainly welcome. 😊🌸

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  5. Sid August 29, 2019 — 7:44 am

    Soo strong, I love it 💙💙💙💙

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  6. MoonLight 💫 August 29, 2019 — 9:10 am

    Too deep 👌

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      Samyak Singh August 29, 2019 — 7:53 pm

      You’re very kind neighbor..thank you💙💓💙
      All the best for your exams!

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      1. Dua Siddiqui 💫 August 29, 2019 — 8:13 pm

        Thanks Sam 😊❤

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  7. Joel Abakah August 29, 2019 — 10:14 am

    This is a very thoughtful and important micro💚💚
    It’s good you gave an explanation of it because it gave me the deepness of this verse.
    It’s sad sad women still go through stuff like this n I’m glad you’ve put it out there.

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      Samyak Singh August 29, 2019 — 7:59 pm

      It’s poignant and am glad it touched you..thanks for being a genuine reader Joel..thank you so much 😍💓💙💓

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      1. Joel Abakah August 29, 2019 — 8:04 pm

        You’re welcome Sam💚

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        Samyak Singh August 29, 2019 — 8:05 pm

        Kind of you to say so😊
        Thanks for taking the interest💓💓💓

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  8. Florence Ezekafor August 29, 2019 — 1:28 pm

    Well she’s expected to bend and bow, otherwise meet the wrath and those that see, think there’s nothing wrong but when reversed, heaven falls.

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      Samyak Singh August 29, 2019 — 8:03 pm

      And that’s pity for such a hypocrite world. Kind on the outside, callous on the inside. Am glad you caught the meaning behind this. Thank you Flor for being a constant support from the beginning😊💙💓💙

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      1. Florence Ezekafor August 30, 2019 — 6:05 am

        You’re highly welcome.💙

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  9. Riya Rajayyan August 30, 2019 — 2:39 am

    It’s amazing 💝

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      Samyak Singh August 30, 2019 — 4:57 am

      Thank you for reading! Take care💙

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  10. TheSparklingWords August 30, 2019 — 3:03 am

    Strong and beautiful words🙆

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      Samyak Singh August 30, 2019 — 4:42 am

      I’m happy you read it!😍😍😍

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  11. Sarika, Pure Reflections August 30, 2019 — 8:55 am

    Amazing 🌷… you always bring out…such issues which are so deep-rooted in our society…
    Well done 👏👌🌹

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      Samyak Singh August 30, 2019 — 1:49 pm

      It’s a delight to hear from you! Glad you fetched the meaning behind this!💓😊😊

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  12. Mermaid August 30, 2019 — 9:34 am

    Remarkable!

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  13. Tanusri sen August 30, 2019 — 11:28 am

    Beautifully explained the pain of her within very few lines

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      Samyak Singh August 30, 2019 — 1:39 pm

      I’m so glad you got the meaning! 💓
      Thank You for reading!😊😊

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  14. Sngms August 30, 2019 — 1:51 pm

    I nominated you for the liebster awards .https://wp.me/pbadpi-af

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      Samyak Singh August 30, 2019 — 5:56 pm

      Awww that’s so kind of you!!
      Congratulations on the award!!
      Really appreciate your nomination..Thank you so much.

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      1. Sngms August 30, 2019 — 5:57 pm

        Most welcome 🙏😊

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  15. Nimish August 30, 2019 — 4:57 pm

    I absolutely love this 🙂 very deep …brother

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      Samyak Singh August 30, 2019 — 5:57 pm

      Thanks bro.means a lot when you drop your words here!😊💙

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  16. Jessica August 31, 2019 — 2:29 am

    Love how you illustrate violence in deep and gentle but strong and artistic way. A true gentleman 🙂

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      Samyak Singh August 31, 2019 — 4:55 am

      Thank you so much Jess💓
      Appreciate that you caught the theme…indeed it’s a foul practice still prevalent..we need to forego it with the help of our voice!😊

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      1. Jessica September 1, 2019 — 5:23 am

        or with pen and paper (or in our case, our blogs 😀 )

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        Samyak Singh September 1, 2019 — 1:11 pm

        Yeah let’s see if it makes any difference!

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  17. Moushmi Radhanpara August 31, 2019 — 7:30 am

    So much said in so few lines. well done, Smayak!! This was very thoughtful!

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      Samyak Singh August 31, 2019 — 2:46 pm

      I’ve grown into these lines since I wrote them.. Thanks a lot. 😊

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  18. Yasmin Khan August 31, 2019 — 4:57 pm

    This micro represents a macro issue.
    And this coming from a man means a lot more👏👏👏

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      Samyak Singh September 1, 2019 — 1:12 pm

      Ohh that’s so humble of you!😊😊😊🤗

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  20. Mia Winhertt September 1, 2019 — 6:39 pm

    Good to see guys like you helping to change the general mindset! 👏

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      Samyak Singh September 1, 2019 — 8:02 pm

      Let’s see if it brings even a bit of a change!😊
      Thanks a lot..really appreciate your read💙

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  21. MAP195 September 1, 2019 — 8:07 pm

    wonderful words samyak…thanks for share

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      Samyak Singh September 1, 2019 — 8:12 pm

      Thanks a lot Obaid bhai💙💙🤗

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      1. MAP195 September 1, 2019 — 8:13 pm

        pleasure …..

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  22. Shantanu Baruah September 2, 2019 — 4:56 am

    Damn beautiful – great choice of words too

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      Samyak Singh September 2, 2019 — 8:28 am

      You are magnificent in lending us the support!😊💓💙

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      1. Shantanu Baruah September 2, 2019 — 1:12 pm

        You too as well 🌸😊

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  23. A. Rinum September 2, 2019 — 9:56 pm

    A short cute poem 😉

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      Samyak Singh September 2, 2019 — 10:49 pm

      It really means a lot!😊
      Thanks for reading😃

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  24. Mitali Rajawat September 3, 2019 — 12:59 pm

    Hey! I nominated you for liebster award.

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      Samyak Singh September 3, 2019 — 1:30 pm

      Thank you so much for this kind gesture!💓 Love the support and nominations I get from you all.

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      Samyak Singh September 4, 2019 — 8:45 am

      Means a lot to hear from you! I’m Very happy🤗🤗😍

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      Samyak Singh September 4, 2019 — 10:52 am

      Thank you for passing by! Keep the support and stay connected!😊👏

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  27. stevescountry September 5, 2019 — 9:05 pm

    Wonderfully written Samyak! So much said in so few words, quite amazing! Hard to believe that such still goes on, it needs to stop. Thanks for putting this out. I’m late i know, sorry about that. Have a great day!

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      Samyak Singh September 6, 2019 — 4:11 am

      It’s totally fine Steve…matter a lot to me when you make an effort to read my stuff..thank you😊😊💙

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      1. stevescountry September 6, 2019 — 11:28 am

        I always enjoy it, just a little slow getting there sometimes! I need to do better. Hope your day has been great!😃😺🌞

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        Samyak Singh September 6, 2019 — 1:45 pm

        Yeah it’s been tiring before the weekend! Now it’s time to relax and write more and more!💛😃

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      3. stevescountry September 6, 2019 — 1:47 pm

        Hey that’s it! Writing is a great way to relax, at least I find it is.😁🌞🍁🍂

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        Samyak Singh September 6, 2019 — 1:49 pm

        Yeah it is and it’s fun doing so!💙💙 Have a great day Steve!!😊😊

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      5. stevescountry September 6, 2019 — 1:54 pm

        Thanks so much! Off to a rough start so things will get better!😁😸🌞👍

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        Samyak Singh September 6, 2019 — 1:57 pm

        Eventually they’ll turn out to be great!💙💙

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      7. stevescountry September 6, 2019 — 2:00 pm

        Absolutely right! Don’t stop just because the day doesn’t start out quite the way we want. Keep going, it will get better.😃🌞

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        Samyak Singh September 6, 2019 — 2:18 pm

        That’s right Steve. Your words are so calming 💙💙💙

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      9. stevescountry September 6, 2019 — 3:47 pm

        Thanks so much Samyak! Hmm, I have never thought about it that way, yet several people have said the same thing lately.🤔🙂🌞

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        Samyak Singh September 6, 2019 — 7:21 pm

        Yes you believe then and you’ll find out about it being true😊💙

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      11. stevescountry September 6, 2019 — 8:27 pm

        Thanks again, quite interesting.🙂🌞

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  28. dessertflower5 September 8, 2019 — 3:09 am

    Very deep

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      Samyak Singh September 8, 2019 — 4:16 am

      Thanks for reading…appreciate your support💞💞

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      1. dessertflower5 September 8, 2019 — 4:44 am

        My pleasure 😊
        Have a great day

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      Samyak Singh September 23, 2019 — 2:44 pm

      Thank you so much for reading. Means a lot to come across your blog. 😊💙💙

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      1. youlittlecharmer September 23, 2019 — 2:47 pm

        No problem! Your posts are great! I only hope mine don’t disappoint! 👍🖤

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        Samyak Singh September 23, 2019 — 3:09 pm

        Thanks a lot. They only do one thing- amuse me💕

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      3. youlittlecharmer September 23, 2019 — 3:15 pm

        Oh I’m sure they do more than that! You shouldn’t under estimate your talent! 😁🖤

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        Samyak Singh September 23, 2019 — 3:17 pm

        Yes that’s a given fact. But your work is admirable as well.💕

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      5. youlittlecharmer September 23, 2019 — 3:28 pm

        Thank you, you’re very kind 🖤

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  30. Richa September 30, 2019 — 2:22 pm

    I don’t have words to say. You always amazed me. ❤❤❤

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      Samyak Singh September 30, 2019 — 3:21 pm

      Glad to hear from you Richa💙💙😊

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